by Tina M Clark
Monday, August 22, 2005
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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For dreamers and lovers everywhere....
From a Friend to a soulmate.......(rewrite)
Here we are so far apart
I should be sleeping,
but thoughts of you keep
running through my heart.
I see you laying there
so sweet in sleeps slumber
hair tossed and body relaxed
and there is just something
I would love to ask
Can I curl up next to you?
wrap my arms across your chest?
Can I breath your essence,
and steal a few kisses?
Can I run my fingers,
across your skin?
And feel the tremors as they begin?
Can I look in your eyes,
and feel your smile?
Can I trust you forever,
here next to my side?
Can I whisper, I LOVE YOU BABE
and hear your, I LOVE YOU TOO?
Can I make love to you most of the night
and feel your arms wrap around me
keeping me safe each night?
Can I wake with you each morning
and look upon your face
and feel the love with in your embrace ?
As I see you laying there,
I know one thing for sure,
you've snuck in
knocked down my defences,
and opened my heart.
You've gave me the desire
to seek a new start.
You will always be my soul mate
and you will always make me smile
and someday soon I pray
we will meet across these many miles!
©2005 Tina Clark
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|Reviewed by Daniel Patterson (Reader)
|Can You? If only you would! Ken is one lucky man, I envy him because of you. In anycase it is a very heart felt and wrote poem full of passion and desire. Well done
Hugs to you sweety
|Reviewed by Ken Bass (Reader)
|Tina, I am speachless. The depth of which the core of this piece hit me, was nothing but incredible. You have a talent for letting him feel that he is in your arms, feeling every moment, of every carress of your body against his. Awesome!!!|
|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|O M G-Tina- I hope you will meet too- Since you did in thought/mind and heart- Possibly by Soul-Travel
YOU Girl- WRite so clear- Never fear (haha) I will always be near reading you another day- Warmly,Sheee
|Reviewed by Sue Hess
|sneaky devils, they have a way of getting under one's skin, huh. very romantic tina|
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Beautiful love write, full of longing for the one who has captured your heart.