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Misunderstood
by Richard Christopher Criso Suarez

Tuesday, August 23, 2005
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I felt this poem spark up from the
righteousness ,....possible hilier than though vibe I may give off.The main thing in this is humor or so i try.



This piece is a little in your face and slang speech

Is used to enhance the character of the poem;

Although I speak correct English , I at times

Slip into the slang of New York…..

Oh well

Hope you all like this…a lil?




 


 


 

A man walked up to me and said the following;

Watz wit chu mang

If I had a pistol I’d say Bang

I mean dang!’’

Seems like you judge everyone for everythang

You’re mean and holdin’ a grudge

Will you eva git enough?

Let it go bro and let Love!



I said Yo why you speak about what

You don’t even know

I love people and I live and let others do so

And if you can’t stand me why

Do you hate me bro?!



It’s up to me who to accept and who to reject

Into my life

But I do accept the average imperfect guy

If You really want to know what I write about and why

It’s the hypocrite In max disguise

Insisting to gain your truth and

As soon as You approve he’s in your back

Attacking with many knives

It’s him not I

Who seeks to stop all beautiful lives

One way or another it’s this

That gets me pissed and

I insist that others realize

I will not retreat nor apologize!



The man then said;

Yo my mang I am glad You told me

And I now understand

Dang B you the mang you hear me!

I’m wit chu and I agree

You’re living good and free but the Hypocrite

Won’t let you be!

Well now you know I got your back G

AND I owe you an apology !

No My Dog

Nothing’s wrong You and me discussed our thoughts

And finally we’re getting alone

United and strong!

It all good in hood when you talk about

It the way we all should!

The End

Copyright ã 2005 Rich Criso Suarez

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Reviewed by Kate Burnside 8/24/2005
I like this A LOT!!! No lil thang sed eyar... but a whole dang lot!! Brilliant character-sketches which are, again, worthy of the best satirical "cartooning" (meaning they have point, intelligence, craft and specificity - rather than slapstick comedy, of course.) You have captured your subject and presented your ideas in the most strong and effective way. Very well done. I speak and write in rotten English much of the time! It's fun, init?! LOL Kate xx
Reviewed by Carole Mathys 8/23/2005
Very good Rich...great slang!!

peace, Carole
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 8/23/2005
This is good..enjoyed the slang!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater 8/23/2005
Rich,

Excellent slang view my friend. Hypocrisy speaks in evil tongue. Hea, Rich Criso ... I'm going to look at your inspirational 'stangs.
I need some uplift thangs! Peace and love, brother.

Sage
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