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Dangerous Sharp
by Kate Burnside
Friday, September 16, 2005
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... Yes, I know. But it IS Friday and I HAVE got needles on the brain, honest! :)) (Hmmm... needles ON the brain or IN the brain, I wonder...) Besides which it is a breath of fresh air from trawling through skeletons and is also to counteract the grumpiness of putting on weight... Heigh ho, it is all enough to make a girl take to the larder with the biscuit tin. Have a great weekend, Folks! xx


DANGEROUS SHARP


You are a colour I canít quite name
and a face I canít imagine.

You are the scent of an unknown skin,
the sign to a path not yet taken.

You are a sudden intake of breath,
the thrill of unexpected pleasure

and the pressure of a bodyweight
that expels a delicious sigh...

You are a taste of the glittering prize,
the splendour of a bloodless
snow field of peace.

The quickened pulse at my temples,
the aching throb in my throat,
you are the sharp prick
at my point of need.


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Reviewed by A PAX 9/18/2005
Oh i love where this took me!So mysterious...a spicy tease...and needed breeze of words!
Reviewed by Chanti Niven 9/18/2005
I've caught up all the poetry I missed in your den and feel a little sad that my literary feast for this evening has come to an end. I console myself with the knowledge that you will be back with more inspired brilliance to tantalise our creative taste buds. I've often thought 'If only I could write like that...' but there is only one Kate Burnside and nobody could hope to emulate your style. We can only be the best that we can be. Thank you for inspiring me to reach beyond myself. I feel the need to wrrrrrrrrrrrrite!!! lol
Take care beautiful person
Chanti
Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G 9/17/2005
Beautifully written Sweet Kate and deeply taken- Honesty pours out once more- No worries!!! Needed- This is very nice-Warmly and Sweetly,Sheeeoxo
Reviewed by Bonnie Torrente 9/17/2005
Good work Kate! Is it hot in here? It must be me.

Bonnie
Reviewed by Sherry Heim 9/16/2005
To be able to have someone who knows you well enough to be there at the very moment that you need them is a blessing within itself. Weight on/Weight off...we are women for heaven's sakes, it is what we do!!!! You look lovely, and you are such a lovely lady. What more could another wish of you? Your soul shines always, Kate!
Take care,
Sherry
Reviewed by jude forese 9/16/2005
sometimes the "dangerous" nature of experience merges into the eloquence of a sharp yet precise moment of appreciation ... and in those moments, the prize of peaceful communication tantalizes the mind and excites the soul ... excellent poem, Kate ... the imagery is wonderful ...
Reviewed by Felix Perry 9/16/2005
Oh sweet Kate this is an exceptional write and one that I know comes deep from within your heart. I don't know about you putting on weight but each new picture I see of you look younger and prettier.

Hugs.
Pops
Reviewed by E T Waldron 9/16/2005
A prick in the nick of time quite an accomplishment Kate!;-)
You are as sharp as a whittler's blade,and gifted to the hilt!
Sly too,in getting your message across;-)

Eileen
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 9/16/2005
Kate,

WELL, now. This is a keeper, for sure--what imagery! What passion! WHATTA WRITE!! It pulses through me and lifts me to pleasureable heights--your genius amazes me. GOOD SHOW!

(((HUGS)) and love, Karla. :)

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by L. Figgins 9/16/2005
The way I feel when a poem finds life on the page, Kate. This poem is palpable like a pulse. Love it!!
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 9/16/2005
One to keep.
Outstanding imagery. Carmens right.

BTW. You put on weight? Seen more meat in a butter dish.
Reviewed by Aberjhani 9/16/2005
An intoxicating rush of nearly mystical sensuous lyricism that pulls the reader deep inside the heightened vibrations of the poet. The ecstasy reported becomes the ecstasy experienced. A truly marvelous write:-)
Reviewed by Kenny Baez 9/16/2005
ah, all the things you are, Kate! As a poet, you are the breath of spring. xx k
Reviewed by Paul Berube 9/16/2005
Kate,

All that sharpness could deflate ones ego. This is truly an inner sense of being. Very well written. Some exquisite lines.
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 9/16/2005
"You are a taste of the glittering prize,
the splendour of a bloodless
snow field of peace. "

Superb poetry, Kate. Thank you for sharing your gift. Love and peace.

Regis

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 9/16/2005
"you are the sharp prick
at my point of need.....oh boy WHAT YOU THINKING IS WHAT I AM THINKING...lol sounds prickly GOOFY Good..lolapot!!

Lov Tinka
Reviewed by Jane Rodway 9/16/2005
Stanza five is brilliant- could almost take that and use it as a start for a poem on its own- great work.
Reviewed by Dale Clark 9/16/2005
Ah so good and as Karen said,
"you are a peach" and take the
sharp prick and call me in the
morning LOL sorry had to go there.
Reviewed by George Carroll 9/16/2005
That's one prick that won't get you in trouble and can ease your head pain.
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 9/16/2005
excellent lines! thanks for the prayers and review; you are a peach! MWWWAAA's to you!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero 9/16/2005
Conscience dictates! And it often comes to us as that other 'us' which will nudge and prick until attention is paid. You're a good writer Kate.

Carmen :-)
Reviewed by Peter Benson 9/16/2005
Oh, have some Bovril and a Marmite sandwich! You'll feel more fulfilled. <grins>
Interesting take on the imaginary lover...or the anticipated one.
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