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Yo Ho Ho!
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Friday, September 30, 2005
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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Hee hee...*grins.* Yep, feeling a bit...sassy. :)



The sea gently licks each of my toes
and sniffs around my ankles;
it reaches up to caress the bend
behind each one of my knees.
It reads the moles written on
my body and sees a treasure map
leading to buried pleasure,
as long as it's willing to explore.
It tenderly removes my
swimsuit covering, and, with mounting
passion, sees the dunes of my
thighs sparkling like diamonds in
the early morning sunlight.
It follows the bumps and dives into
the cave of wonders between
them, desperately looking for that
magic "Yo-ho-ho-and-a-
bottle-of-rum"/"X"-marks-the-spot/you
know, that HAPPY kind of place.

(c) 2005, Karla Dorman.

  

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Reviewed by Nordette Adams 4/13/2006
I'm with Cynthia, the last lines cracked me up. :-) ~~Nordette
Reviewed by Cynthia Borris 4/10/2006
Karla,

You made me laugh with the yo-ho-ho leading to the yo-ho-a-ha!

Thanks!

Cynthia
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 4/8/2006
Oh My! How did I miss this sexy write? Water is just like that isn't it? :-)
Reviewed by john zimmerman 10/2/2005
missed this one first time round

now who's melting monitors???

waitng for the sequel what happens next???

good write

john+

yeah what does happen next.....
Reviewed by Lori Moore 10/1/2005
You gotta love the sea. Nice one.
Reviewed by Kate Burnside 10/1/2005
Oh, THAT happy kinda place!! Yo-ho-ho indeed! Lush and lusty, Carole says, briney and brazen... and why not? As if we can actually hide anything from nature?! :)) If you're not gonna go and dance naked under a raincloud, the least you can do is a bit of skinnydipping in the modesty of the ocean depths!! No wonder he sparkles! Luv this! Kate xx
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 10/1/2005
(((Karla)))

WELL now! You sassy little thing, you! LOL Delightfully scintillating, sexy, erotic write; very well done! BRAVA!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Think I need a cold shower to cool off!~ *Gasping* LOL
Reviewed by Sandra Mushi 10/1/2005
This is a sizzler!! Daarn!!! That naughty water ... (((grins)))
You sound a whole lot better too, Karla! Sensual, steamy write! HOOOT!!

God bless, sweets!

Sandie.



Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper 10/1/2005
surely sassy Karla,
Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope) 10/1/2005
Lucky waters (smile.
Abdi-Noor
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 10/1/2005
Wow....yes sassy as can be....naughty girl!!

Hey congratz on your podcast offering.....next time I want to hear YOU!!

O'okayyyyyyy!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Cynth'ya cynthyaspeaks@gmail.com 9/30/2005
Love that line "buried pleasure." You're gettin' a bit dangerous in here on this Authors Den ship, "ain't cha' mate." Arrrrrrgh! LOL
blessin's Sis, (I mean, Capt'n Karla)
cynth'ya
Reviewed by Carole Mathys 9/30/2005
WOW...talk about lush and lusty...love it Karla!

peace and love, Carole
Reviewed by E T Waldron 9/30/2005
Whoa! You HOT MAMA, steaming up the waters like that! Haven't you heard of global warming without you adding to it!;-)
A scintillating sensual feast!WTG Karla! Want to record it?;-)

Love,
Eileen
Reviewed by jude forese 9/30/2005
sees the dunes of my
thighs sparkling like diamonds in
the early morning sunlight

luv that image!

a treasure poem that delights the senses ...
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 9/30/2005
And when you are bad you are s-o-o-o-o good!
Reviewed by F William Broome 9/30/2005
Girl - You are so BAAAAAAAAAAD!
How dare you stir up the water like that ! ! !

You do write Gooooooooood, however. - Bill
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 9/30/2005
OOO. I never heard of Sassy. But I think I suddenly know.

Go you. Hit that X,X,X



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