|Reviewed by Nordette Adams
|I'm with Cynthia, the last lines cracked me up. :-) ~~Nordette|
|Reviewed by Cynthia Borris
You made me laugh with the yo-ho-ho leading to the yo-ho-a-ha!
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Oh My! How did I miss this sexy write? Water is just like that isn't it? :-)|
|Reviewed by john zimmerman
|missed this one first time round
now who's melting monitors???
waitng for the sequel what happens next???
yeah what does happen next.....
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|You gotta love the sea. Nice one.|
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|Oh, THAT happy kinda place!! Yo-ho-ho indeed! Lush and lusty, Carole says, briney and brazen... and why not? As if we can actually hide anything from nature?! :)) If you're not gonna go and dance naked under a raincloud, the least you can do is a bit of skinnydipping in the modesty of the ocean depths!! No wonder he sparkles! Luv this! Kate xx|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
WELL now! You sassy little thing, you! LOL Delightfully scintillating, sexy, erotic write; very well done! BRAVA!!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
Think I need a cold shower to cool off!~ *Gasping* LOL
|Reviewed by Sandra Mushi
|This is a sizzler!! Daarn!!! That naughty water ... (((grins)))
You sound a whole lot better too, Karla! Sensual, steamy write! HOOOT!!
God bless, sweets!
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|surely sassy Karla,|
|Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)
|Lucky waters (smile.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Wow....yes sassy as can be....naughty girl!!
Hey congratz on your podcast offering.....next time I want to hear YOU!!
|Reviewed by Cynth'ya firstname.lastname@example.org
|Love that line "buried pleasure." You're gettin' a bit dangerous in here on this Authors Den ship, "ain't cha' mate." Arrrrrrgh! LOL
blessin's Sis, (I mean, Capt'n Karla)
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|WOW...talk about lush and lusty...love it Karla!
peace and love, Carole
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Whoa! You HOT MAMA, steaming up the waters like that! Haven't you heard of global warming without you adding to it!;-)
A scintillating sensual feast!WTG Karla! Want to record it?;-)
|Reviewed by jude forese
|sees the dunes of my
thighs sparkling like diamonds in
the early morning sunlight
luv that image!
a treasure poem that delights the senses ...
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|And when you are bad you are s-o-o-o-o good!|
|Reviewed by F William Broome
|Girl - You are so BAAAAAAAAAAD!
How dare you stir up the water like that ! ! !
You do write Gooooooooood, however. - Bill
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|OOO. I never heard of Sassy. But I think I suddenly know.
Go you. Hit that X,X,X