I believe in us/For Andy
by Jane Rodway
Sunday, October 09, 2005
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For Andy- For always
knowing God leads us
where we are supposed to go.
No matter how many tell me,
things will never be,
that they are just "fantasy,"
I will still hold my head high,
Not about to deny,
that I BELIEVE in dreams.
It's so much easier for some,
to quit before the race is won,
It is much simpler than daring to try,
for not everyone has
the courage to fly,
Some get weakened by trials and fears,
afraid to try or be faced with tears,
and never live but exist for years.
I want to live,
and to know,
to share my life with the one,
who follows his heart to the sun,
unafraid to PAINT THE TOWN BLUE,
and dream no matter what
was said by who,
knowing when love is TRUE,
Knowing they belong with you,
beneath the blue skies or gray,
following God's lighted way.
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|Reviewed by F William Broome
|Go with the heart. The brain is fickle and tricky!
This good writing... from the heart. - Bill
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|I'll tag a super duper sticker on this great poem M|
|Reviewed by Emeka Nwogu
|This is an arrow well aimed. Michelle, you gotta live your dream. I see it come true soon. Right choice, right words, right guy. Always caring, always adoring.
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
very endearing poem spoken from the heart of a pure romantic with the passion of the universe captured in your soul
|Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
|I got bells clanging in my ear.............
Love to you both, ATB now and forever
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Midnight I had a grand time
I spoke to someone who is honest and true
Can it be there are people still of this ilk?
Had a talk until it was light
Every word was articulate and polite
Listened to all I had to say
Loves everything I do
Even loved to PAINT TOWN BLUE
My how I wish so dreams can come true
Even when they awaken something new
As everyday we would see life with the same view
Do dreams come true ?
Some memory you have.
Love conquers all.
Gotta keep believing. Such powerful faith. Nothing stands in the way of such determined faith.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|You are both strengthened by physical trials, among other things, and you will weather this phase too. I pray the sun soon shines on you both and happy days fill you with lovely poems...
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|The heart knows when it is the right one and once you find it, never let go of the dream. Sometimes things are not as we wish them to be, but that does not mean that your time will not come. It has come and you will both find a way to make everything perfect for yourselves and your relationship. A beautiful heart-bare write, Michelle. Andy is one lucky Chap, I'd say!
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Way to go Michelle!!
I am sure he is a gem and will not let go either!!
God bless you two!!