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Deep Do Do
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Saturday, October 15, 2005
Rated "G" by the Author.
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If you're living you're in deep, whether you want to face it or not.

This isn't alarming,
I'm really into this poeming.
I'm buried into living,
hope God is forgiving.
Peace and love got my goat,
so much that,
I'll sink with the love boat.
I love my fellow man,
but at times him
I can hardly stand.
Food got me sunk,
I leave alcohol to the drunk.
Then there's sex,
it's a continuous hex.

Maybe I need to see Dr Phil
get with his healing deal.
Surely I do do a lot of praying,
will until this body is decaying.
I know I'm in deep,
pray to the Lord
my soul to keep.
Not only my soul I pray,
but everyones each day.

We're all buried,
I'm not worried.
Worrying is for the birds,
and these are only words.
Words wrote in time,
some make sense,
others only rhyme.


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Reviewed by Regis Auffray 10/16/2005
There is wisdom in your verses, Grady. Worrying is bad. I know. It makes me sick but I think I may be divesting myself of it. Thanks. Love and peace.

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot 10/16/2005
Great Write, don't know if the birds worry or not, but I know we are gonna have to concern ourselves with the birds, especially migratory ones,

Good to read you
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 10/15/2005
Good words to live by.
Good to read you again too!

Reviewed by Sandie Angel 10/15/2005
Deep do do is where we're at, but we've learned to deal with it mostly.

Good write, Grady!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 10/15/2005
Oh ain't we all in deep....but they say it's not what's on top that's what's inside!!

And That could get you in!!

Lovew tWinka
Reviewed by George Carroll 10/15/2005
They rhyme and make sense as do all your poems. Excellent.

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