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|Reviewed by Lois Christensen
|Just such a fine write. My granddaugher Shannon is in college to be a vet, but she has 8 years of schooling ahead but that does not stop her from checking the boys out either. Mother says no going to Phila on a trip with one, and his mother won't let him use the car, so they are not all the time happy.|
|Reviewed by Linda Hill
I have always thought of a brand new day as a clean slate. A chance to 'start over'. I love mornings , with the whole day ahead, uncharted and just waiting for me. Excellent poetry!
|Reviewed by Robert Martin
|"To celebrate existence for awhile"
Boy do I know how that feels. Steven, I don't always review or even read all the poetry that the people I'm tracking write, but I always make a point of reading yours, and it is always insightful, and, honestly, you mean quite a bit to me as well. You have served as my inspiration on many occasions. I write differently than you do, sure, but I think we both write about very important subject matter, and I believe we both have an important message to bring to the world. Keep on writing my friend, I can't wait to see what else you have to share.
|Reviewed by Sara Coslett
|There is no better feeling in the world than life. The problem is that so many people, even though they are on the right side of the tomb, don't understand the gift of being alive. So for them, a brand new day spells another day of waiting to die.
Excellent poem Steven. I've missed reading you. ~ Sara
|Reviewed by Rukiya Faizah (Reader)
|I completely love the ending!!! Completely love it. Thanks.|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Those pretty ladies are lucky to be able to check you out....Sir!!
Cheeky ending that made me smile,,,,lol!!