by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Thursday, October 20, 2005
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Don't I wish!! LOL
I'll be away for a few days, the library is updating the computers (AGAIN)...see y'all upon my return. Until then, keep writing, and I'll keep reading!
All I know is,
it came undone all by itself,
this unruly obi
holding my kimono together.
I can't help it
if the silk slipped off of
my shoulders and
that my breasts popped out
and his eyes got even rounder
(like teacups, they were) ...
all I know is
the kimono wound up on the mat
and so did the
chopsticks I had in my hair
as we forgot what
we were supposed to be doing
and spent the rest
of the evening in bed, making love.
(c) 2005, Karla Dorman.
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|Reviewed by Robin Labenberg
|hmmm my kind of ending..nice one!|
|Reviewed by Mary Lynn Plaisance
|Don't ya just lurves those ((Geisha Moments))...*lol*--...I like your poem vedy moosh Sha~~~~It's appealing---- :) Mary Lynn (BeB)|
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|Steaming and delcious Karla, now I need a moment like that....
love and peace, Carole
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Don't geisher self in trouble.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|okay Karla now cut that out;-)!!! What a trip, wish It happened to me;-) You look so good in that pic no wonder he played with your chopsticks;-)Great sensual poem !Have a productive time away writing more poems like this! Will miss you both...
|Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)
|Now we know the REAL reason why you won't be around for the next few days!!!! Eeeeehaaaa!!! ;) Hope you are well and happ!?!?!?
|Reviewed by Michelle Mills
|Dang, I had to check the top of the screen to be sure I was reading Karla's poetry!!!!!!!!!! Wow! Smokin' and sexy!!!! Michelle|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Oh boy did you gryt pictures Karla never mind, lol they couldn't compete with the images in my imagination right now. Very vivid striking image that is for sure.
|Reviewed by Rukiya Faizah (Reader)
|(((clap))) ...so simple yet so enticing. this is a very sexy poem and pictured added to my visualization of your words.|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Fine offering...see you when ever...enjoy the rest...if you can call it that!!
Thanks for your kind words today!!
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Ya never know when those darn Geisha Moments might occur!
Hope you have a very pleasant time away, too, Karla.
|Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
|Well it's all DINNER!! Reminds me, I've got to take my kimono to the dry cleaners. 'Layed' out in a cultural setting, Karla. Great props!
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Well, now, Karla! Feelin' a bit frisky today, eh?? LOL
Very good write, very enjoyable and stimulating! Very well done; brava!! Take a bow!!!!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|THAT'S what you WERE supposed to be doing!|