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Underneath... by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen Sunday, October 30, 2005 Not rated by the Author. Share Print Save Become a Fan
I am just a structure of bones Underneath a filler of organs Enveloped by skin. If I were not me, would I notice? I am just layers of specialized flesh Underneath a filigree of nerves Of atomic selection. If I were not me, would I notice? I am just an endeavor of mind Underneath a fantasy of worth Enveloped by skin. If I were not me, would I have noticed? Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen � Copyright 10/29/05

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Reviewed by Tinka Boukes	10/30/2005

A good question Erin....maybe not....who will ever know!! Love Tinka




Reviewed by Debashish Haar	10/30/2005

This is about consciousness, and the learning of the higher self--they call spiritualism! I see it as a question on molecularism school, but then wonder did you mean "thermal selection" or "statistical selection" or just "selection" (without the adjective)? A very well written poem. Calvin