|Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
|Beautifully expressed message of lament and hope, Dale. Exquisite imagery... truth laying upon the land like grass... wonderful line!
This piece touches the Soul and warms the heart; let us pray that fellowship can be renewed in our extremely materialistic wounded culture...
Another masterfully pensive write.
|Reviewed by jude forese
|captures the beauty and dilemma of the native american ... unfortunately, the campfire may never be rekindled but hope will always burn within it ...|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Very Native American...and lovely to read.
|Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
|Dale This is Magnificent and such a very wonderful Tribute to our forefathers, You really grabbed hold of everything. The horses hooves and everything. Magnificent
..."We follow the old North trail into the past
still we search for the truth
and wonder how we’ve came into this chaos
when such peace came before us"...
I too, hope we can find that peace and honor and pride again.
Thanks Dale you are a very Wize Knight!(c :)
Tracey xoox(c :)42
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*® Authors & Creations
|One more deeply beautiful and meaningful addition to the Cycle of Fire, dear Dale. A continued pleasure to read.
|Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
|you are really making me crave roasted marshmallows and s'mores, Dale, with all these warm and snuggly campfire writes. have enjoyed them immensely. Dawn|
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|Just as the fire's flames are perpetual and eternal, in one sense, it creates the hope and expectation that past and future can be linked and recovered into a oneness of being again. You've struck gold with this sequence of writes, Dale, and are mining a very rich seam that creates a real sense of warmth and feel-good. TY Kate xx And I hope you're DANCING!! I can guarantee you WOULD be if Stevie Nicks showed up! :))|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Great offering Dale!!
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|I agree with Joseph! Great imagery in this poem of yearning for the past goodness to emanate once again.Excellent Dale!
|Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*®
|Yes, these are the moments we must seize and build upon!
May the campfire warm all hearts and give light to all.
Love & Light,