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Reclamation
by Dale Clark
Sunday, November 20, 2005
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Reclamation
Our green planet
a paradise of beauty
revolves around our sun
Mother Earth
all providing
She must be honored
given adulation
for she provides all
The creations of living
She smiles upon them
demanding devotion
Our Mother Earth
is all forgiving
to those who receive her
We, who plunder and destroy
with our factories, our highways
Our war machines, their chaos
We forget the gifts she gives
We face the wrath of her power
and shall perish
Mother Earth shall have her day
Reclamation
©Dale CJ Clark
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| Reviewed by Tracey Hardie |
11/23/2005 |
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| Shame on us huh... its not nice to forget mother nature..lol A very truthful write. :) |
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| Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*® Authors & Creations |
11/22/2005 |
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Yes... we are killing ourselves. And She aches for us, but can't give us back what we have thoughtlessly discarded when we misinterpreted the meaning of Her Gift of Providence, which was our sense of responsibility. Now, we have to find it ourselves again. Quickly, before it's too late.
An important reminder, dear Dale, through poetry that is always a privilege to read. Thank you.
Love&Light*
Alexandra* |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
11/22/2005 |
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| Amaen to that. Good job! |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
11/21/2005 |
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yes, it's time to begin to reclaim our planet ... hopefully, it can be done over the next hundred years ...
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| Reviewed by Debashish Haar |
11/21/2005 |
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A very thoughtful poem, I could feel the calmly approaching tidal wave ready to hit the shores.
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| Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® |
11/21/2005 |
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When those who are appointed as caretakers do not fulfill their mission, they are inevitably ushered out of the garden.
Love & Light,
Joseph |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
11/20/2005 |
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Matches what my poem is about today! Excellent message in a wisdom poem, beautifully written Dale!
Love,
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
11/20/2005 |
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And reclamation it will be for sure!!
My the Lord help me to NOT be a witness of that day!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
11/20/2005 |
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We forget the gifts she gives
We truly do - and I also believe that She will one day soon - Have her Day - and Her Wrath will be unstoppable. |
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