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| Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader) |
11/23/2005 |
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Tinka, This is so sad. Beautiful poem but a heart too too sad for such a beautiful lady w/ such a dynomite smile always there for me Always! Thanks Tinka,
Remember, a frown is just a smile turned upside down so stand on your head if you must and see the smile that's hiding behind that frown.
All our Love
Tracey42xoox All prayers are heard. no such thing as Silent Prayers! |
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| Reviewed by Emeka Nwogu |
11/22/2005 |
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| Cheer up. Do not work yourself up. Sad. |
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| Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® |
11/22/2005 |
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Turn that frown upside down, Tinka!
Love & Light,
Joseph |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
11/22/2005 |
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Tinka,
Definitely a tear jerker. Well written piece. |
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| Reviewed by Paul Williams |
11/22/2005 |
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AWWWW this is sad Tinks, Hugs.
Paul;-) |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
11/22/2005 |
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| Much too sad, Tinky. |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
11/22/2005 |
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Very nicely done...
I'm using spearmint chapstick for my cracked lip. Not sure bout me cracked brain though. |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
11/21/2005 |
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| Reviewed by Regina Pounds |
11/21/2005 |
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Big hugs, Tinka!
love,
Gina |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
11/21/2005 |
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Aawwwee. To cheer you up, I read it out loud.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
11/21/2005 |
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I stills love you and your accent...
I think you would laugh if you heard my
accent...
Greatly written sad poem
x0x0x0x0x |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
11/21/2005 |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
11/21/2005 |
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| Powerfully sad poem. |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
11/21/2005 |
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Powerful poem Tinka, first verse really grabs the throat, last one chokes on tears...superb work!
Love,
eileen |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
11/21/2005 |
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| Aw, your little smiley is frowning. Drat. When life is like this, it is utter despair. |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
11/21/2005 |
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| Well said. |
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| Reviewed by Suzy Karnow (Reader) |
11/21/2005 |
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Left deep cutting hurt
With eyes so bewildered
Sealed by utter darkness
Left behind to
Bleed....
LOVE the last stanza!!
Great poem! |
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