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Awesome Pain
by Tinka Boukes
Thursday, December 01, 2005
Rated "G" by the Author.
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“Awesome Pain”


Let me be understood…
As to understand why!!

You looked me in the eye
And those awesome eyes shine
You touched my soul
And that was an awesome feeling
You piss me off
That causes awesome pain
You explain to me why!!
And that brought a awful lot of tears 
You made my head spin at 160
Oh!! What an awesome feeling
Just to tell me “sorry”
This is not the time for this shit
Now you gone and left me
With this awesome worry!!
Till I see you again… tears
Searching and hoping… gone
Till I find you by luck… smiling
You looked me in the eye once again
And T
……...H
………..A
………….T is an awesome feeling too
And you pissed me off once again
And I pissed you off… silly me!!
All in the name
Of Love
Please forgive me!!
And now you don’t mail me
And I shed a tear
And I…
Die
…S
……L
………O
…………W
……………L
………………Y
Now you have my heart in your hands!!
And that is not So Awesome…. it hurts!!
Handle “sorrow” as I put the roof on fire!!
Know I always loved you without a doubt!!
With this… awesome pain within my heart!!
A----W----E----S----O----M----E--!!
……………………K
………………………A
…………………………Y
……………………………!!


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Reviewed by m w
Love, Hate, Pain and Joy.... all kin to one another when our hearts are engaged
Reviewed by Sue Hess
you left trask speechless...some task in itself tinks
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Quite creative, Tinky, but again, quite sad.
Reviewed by Paul Williams
Tinks, this is a totally Awesome! A sad but lovely write all the same.

Paul;-)
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Tinks your writes just somehow keep getting better and better..Honing those natural talents.. brilliantly said..
Reviewed by Dan Rains
A bit different perhaps, but a good expression of how painful love can be. Shame it has to be that way.
Dan
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
What Can I Say!

TRASK
Reviewed by Steve Patterson
i liked the presentation on this. well done.
cowboy
Reviewed by Sara Coslett
I have to agree, love can be a pain. You always manage to have fun with your writes, even when you try to express your pain. ~ Sara
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Getting a little c-r-e-a-t-i-v-e are we? Gotta love it.
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Beautiful Tinka, lovelywrite.

\Felix
Reviewed by Peter Paton
Love is an enigma..when new it glows fiercely, and then fades away
like the morning dew.
Lovely piece Tinka !
Love
Peter
Reviewed by Kate Clifford
Very clever ending, great write.
Reviewed by George Carroll
Love the instrumental music to this write, it offers some hope for the forlorn.
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Tinka your creativity shines in this poem, as does your never
ending tale of love. Ahhhlove sweet love, who really knows it!
Hope one day you do for true!;-)

(when in doubt try try again(:

Love,
Eileen
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Nighty-Night to all my readers and friends...time for me to do a

horizontal parking!!

Love Tinka
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