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And More
Today, my longing is like the afternoon that smoldered with a scent of invisible apple log fires, or perhaps like the reminiscence of a poem by which I must have felt like snuggling instead of writing. My skin glows with a subliminal sunset of words flavoured of cinnamon and nutmeg I vaguely wonder why, before I spread a pool of honey, or maybe of molten languor at the foot of a mountain of untold desires much too crisp to climb. I let my hand as if it were another poet’s hand glide this whole voluptuousness full of spices and eminence, along one more strophe as sinuous as a hunger for something ready and warm, bubbling in a bowl offered at the threshold of arrival after a very long detour. But the hand stops – and so does that of the other poet - at the first spoonful of nightfall and that is when the lips take over. I swallow a whispered echo and the remnants spill, slowly, in a sigh. From my nipple I wipe the last drop left by this longing. I fall asleep naked, still snuggling by the poem. And I dream of wanting more.
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| Reviewed by Nordette Adams |
12/10/2005 |
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| Lush, senusous imagery throughout, overflowing with vim. I enjoyed this, Alexandra. ~~Nordette |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
12/10/2005 |
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| conceptually magnificent! i luv how you portrayed the sensuous nature of creative expression ... writing poetry is indeed an epicurean experience and the vivid imagery in this poem, seduced my synapses ... a real treat ... |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
12/9/2005 |
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| Alexandra, you reached another realm with this one!;-) Totally mesmerizing!Seductive sensuosity! <(my word;-) |
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| Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® |
12/9/2005 |
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Wow, Xuxa ... you've made me breathless! I am at a loss for words that can express this feeling. This poem is a sensual delight ... hot, Hot, HOT!
"But the hand stops – and so does that of the other poet
- at the first spoonful of nightfall
and that is when the lips take over." <- absolute brilliance!
What follows is a blur of imagination yet it becomes a reality where I also dream of wanting more and know that the dream is within my reach.
You are OAW (One Amazing Woman)!
Ready for more snuggling,
Teu Joseph
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
12/8/2005 |
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| I think we all could use a "little" more as well...Ed |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
12/8/2005 |
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Wow sensuality of the poet and her imagination and dreamworld colliding with reality brings forth this delicious and very arrousing work. Well done dear friend.
Felix |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
12/8/2005 |
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| At the first spoonful of nightfall...Unique, as are all your poems, be they sensual or otherwise they are all a delight. |
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| Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater |
12/8/2005 |
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Spicy, erotic self-indulgence!
Sage |
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