|Reviewed by Lois Christensen
|Destiny, what is our destiny these days. It is to be good and listen to God and finally being with him in our last moment when we take our last breath. It may not be for a while, but we must ponder on it often and do our best to do God's leading and listening to him and asking in prayer helps. Your writings are so sentimentally useful and thoughtful too.|
|Reviewed by Nordette Adams
|You are a wise man, William. Wonderful poem. ~~Nordette|
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|It is our dreams that keep us afloat...
excellent write William...
Carole...love and peace
|Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
|Love it. Wouldn't go back for anything, but. . .l o v e i t.
'Pea' <3 ~~~~ N: Keep dreaming, my friend. Never let go!
|Reviewed by Dan Rains
|I think we need to keep our dreams....gives so of us reason to go on. Another excellent one.
|Reviewed by jude forese
|introspective and wise poem ... i somewhat differ with its conclusions ... we create our own reality ... the hand we deal ourselves all depends what game we are playing ... your express your hand most cleverly ...|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Your writing of late has been fantastic William!
You really shine in this one! Great stuff;-)!
|Reviewed by Michelle Mills
|Bill, this is a great piece...clear, simply and elegantly written...Michelle|
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|This is absolutely stunning, William. A philosopher you be! I will be saving this, thank you.
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Your poetry is reaching new heights..
Have a great Christmas!
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|stuff how many times one has been round the sun..
Let your dreams live forever....
|Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*®
Dreams belong not only to the young. They should not disappear but be kept alive.
Love & Light,
|Reviewed by Joyce Hale
|Ah yes, William. But even *When youth
Was like a rose bud Upon a thorny bush,* even then Life was a double-edge sword. My dreams don't really disappear as much as they feed my soul. Excellent write!
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|But we can always be young at heart, as you are, Bill...Ed|