|Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
|A fine poem, full of images, and the painting is also
very, very nice!
|Reviewed by Arthur Tugman
|Karen, It is a delight to read and give you a review. I am enjoying my second day in this Author's Den. I hope you visit me.|
|Reviewed by Gloria Buono Daly
|This is so inspiring. Your words paint endless love. Thanks for sharing your special gift. My best, Gloria|
|Reviewed by Amy Avatar
|So sensual and pure...and a tad of sadness
making me realise that I know this "if only
you were here" feeling...
Your poetry say it so accurately.
|Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
|Wonderfully passionate and. . .terribly sad, except that it really is true that it is better to have lost and loved than never to have
loved. . .right? Assuming this is autobiographical, you may not feel that way now, but I am betting you will. Live. . .meaning Love. . .ON!! 'Pea' <3 ~~~ Painting's great!!
|Reviewed by Damaa --
|I know that feeling :-)|
|Reviewed by J M
|So longing and beautiful this one is very passionate...|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Reviewed by Candy T (Reader)
|very touching and sadly something i can relate to - i always struggle to overcome my own pride. happily i'm getting better at it as the years pass. thanks for sharing this piece... it moved me.|
|Reviewed by Regina Pounds
|such a tender and passionate outcry...love from afar leaves much to be desired...does it fulfill a need?
your poem expresses a deep commitment and yearning...much tenderness here
|Reviewed by jude forese
|a lovely passionate love poem ... captures the mood nicely ...
|Reviewed by Iva Lawson
|Where, oh where, have all the emotionally accessible men gone? Beautifully written verse about loving a man who's not all there.|
|Reviewed by Nordette Adams
|Don't you just wish sometimes you could mindmeld and get the message through to these fellas? :-) This poem is so honest. Strikingly universal. ~~Nordette|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|My mind screams,
"I love him,
more than life itself.
I adore him.
I worship him.
I'd give him the world if I could."
Change the "him" to "her" and it all fits, Karen.
A most compelling love offering. Thank you for sharing it.
Love and peace to you.
|Reviewed by William Haynes
|You write a great love poem and the painting capped it off so nicely.
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Sweet thoughts of love and longing mixed with a promise of hope for better days. Well done.
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Awww you gotta believe in god given love.. The greatest gift for the few mortals who find true soul love....|
|Reviewed by email@example.com Bennett
|I found out to not put my trust and all my love in man but God. He loves us all so much and only i we ask him to send us the love of everlasting and a love with no pain then we will be happy. I have learned my friend to ask for no more pain but a peace of mind. Excellent expression of the love you felt.|