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| Reviewed by nick |
7/14/2002 |
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| very well written...the meter fluctuates ever so slightly and some of the "yous" should be either thee or ye...but other than that it's one of the best i've found on this site...congrats and continue writing |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
5/19/2002 |
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Nicely written!!!!!
May Lu $*_*$ |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
5/19/2002 |
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| the cycle is complete... |
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