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Christmas Story Poem
by Richard Christopher Criso Suarez

Thursday, December 15, 2005
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a poem I tried to post three times,..
as It once vanished and second time
ereased from my program by a mistaking of my clicking and well,..this one is it!

I didnt write this one as fast as I usually do ,....Because I wrote three versions of it and this one
was the only that didn't erease mysteriously or vanish from PC screen ,...ironicly? the poem says!

Merry Christmas all And safe , happy new year!

She was a young lady little more than a Girl

He was strong and not much more did he know

of the world

She was everything He adored

She was beautiful in every way and her soul so pure

They knew that they belonged together for sure!

How could she bare a child ?

at first he couldn’t understand

But she assured him she was known by no man

it was true and deep inside he knew

and the Angel came to Him

in a dream and announced the news of truth

He returned to her

they were one and the lord with

in them too.

The Angel reappeared and instructed them

to leave

They did not question it

they believed!

the journey was very long and rough

they were strong and tough

and so far from home

they were together but never ever alone

in their love!

Finally they arrived at a village Inn

after they’d survived the traveling

exhausted and tired and needing a place

to retire

anything would be fine

but they asked all and the world declined

they went on no hard feelings in heart or mind

the had with them the Lord

and HE

would his own place of birth find

and so it came to be

in his time

She told her husband this is where

the baby desires to be born

amidst animals who breath will

keep him warm

in a stable of straw and beast

three wise kings traveled from the east

they witnessed everything

the amazed at the tiny size

of the eternal king!

we seldom understand why and when and then

there is the perfect end

which only begins again!

no end

Richard criso Suarez

copyright ă DEC.,2005 HOLY TRINITY



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Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater 12/16/2005
Rich, this is good practice because next year at Christmas, you will be able to read this to your new little nephew! I think when it is time, it will be highly spiritual for him to hear your voice, maybe even putting up the manger nativity scene for your poetry prop, harmonizing with Spirit and family. Feliz Navidad! I love you best, you know.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 12/16/2005
Wonderful write Ricky!!

Enjoyed this!!

love Tinka
Reviewed by Carole Mathys 12/16/2005
You bring new beauty to this
joyous story Rich...excellent and peace
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 12/16/2005
Wonderfully penned, Rich, this ancient story for all time.
Reviewed by E T Waldron 12/15/2005
You tell it beautifully Rich! The visuals are vibrant and your words as well, bringing it all to life! Thank you for sharing!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 12/15/2005
And so it always will......
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 12/15/2005
Love the no end :-) and have always enjoyed this story :-)
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