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Four Haiku
by Lori L Moore
Thursday, December 15, 2005
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autumn wind-
the neighbor’s leaves
now mine

chilly night-
the harvest moon
kissed by my chimney

in the fog-
an owl’s interrogation
adds a chill

in the park-
the squirrel and i
watching nuts

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Reviewed by J M
Exceptional poetry well done.
Reviewed by Henry Lefevre
Ah yes -- but could you explain the rules of Four Haiku. I fear that I have a lot to learn about poetry so any help would be appreciated.
Reviewed by George Carroll
These are some of your best, and since I only have a small tree on my property I can relate to the first one. Right into December I'm raking leaves not my own.
Reviewed by Ian Thorpe
I don't really do haiku Lori so I'll go comment on song of the hypocrite
Reviewed by Sandra Corona
Interesting revelation :)!
Merry Christmas!
Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Watching nuts and cracking jokes if it were me... but these are sublime and gentle with a hint of autumn spice, Lori. Particularly like that nagging old owl! :)) LOL Kate xx
Reviewed by Barbara Terry
"in the park- the squirrel and i watching nuts". I agree, there are a lot of nuts in the park, and they don't grow on bushes or trees either, giggle. Nicwe kus Lori, thnx for sharing. May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, stubborn and determined to a fault, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your still very sad and terrified little sister, Barbie

"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I may as well be."

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
Happy Everything!
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Sweet haiku snapshots, Lori. Thank you for sharing this lovely gift. Love and peace to you.

Reviewed by jude forese
each haiku captures the ambiance of autumn ... vivid and descriptive realism ... a joy to read ...
Reviewed by E T Waldron
I just love your unique take on things Lori. It's what makes your haiku so special. All a delight to savor!

Reviewed by Sara Coslett
LOL...those nuts can get pretty squirrely too. Nice write x 4. ~ Sara
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
The first and fourth was something to smile!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
LOL at the first. In my garden it's like a war zone, the birds and the squirrels fighting over the nuts, and one squirel being watched by a neighbours black cat, thought had enough of this, and chased it back out and into the woods....
The harvest moon is the brightest it's been in yonks, cos it's in a closer orbit this year, and so enchanting too....
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*®
Enjoyed them all.

LOL on that first one Lori ... I hate it when that happens!

Love & Light,
Reviewed by Peter Paton
The second and third haikus do it for me Lori
Have a memorable and satisfying Christmas and New Year 2006
Reviewed by Janet Parker
These are wonderful. I especially like the touch of humor in the first one.
Reviewed by Steve Patterson
i work a convenience store, graveyard (11pm till 7 amm) i see the nuts & they are squirrley.

nice write, darlin.
Reviewed by Sherry Heim
These are all soooo good, Lori. I can really relate to the first one since I have no trees and tons of leaves. The last one is really them all! Merry Christmas to you, Lori.
Take care,
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Wonderful capture of the sights and sounds around you and puts the reader in the picture with you.
Merry Christmas Lori,
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Truly love that last one, Lori!
Reviewed by Joyce Hale
Excellent haiku, Lori! I enjoyed them very much.

Peace. Joyce
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