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|Reviewed by Aberjhani
|I read these extraordinary lines and, of all things, see D.H. Lawrence and Salvadore Dali sitting down to write them together:-) Your gift for highly original metaphors suffused with penetrating philosophical insight and emotional/psychological depth always makes for absorbing poetry.
|Reviewed by Chanti Niven
|Brilliant writing Erin. I loved the wonderful use of metaphor to create such descriptive word pictures. Much enjoyed!
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Sounds like you need to make a sacrifice to the gods of desert storms, maybe one of those Christmas presents would be a good thing to use...ed|