|Reviewed by Cynth'ya firstname.lastname@example.org
|If anybody asked me to describe your writing Bro. A, it would be two words: mystically romantic!
blessin's, and best new year ever to you!
|Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
|Holy s_t. Sorry, but this blows my mind. Damn, but you are good.
No wonder scrolling down reveals "breathtaking" again and again.
I gotta get t'work!!! May 2006 bring you blessing after
blessing. With awe, respect, and affection, 'Pea' PS: Forgot gratitude. Here 'tis! ;)
|Reviewed by Vesna Blueflame
|YOU are a Master Poet..I am enthralled by this piece..read it over and over again..what talent..wow! I'd say I'm one of your greatest fans.
Saved this one..thankyou Aberjhani!
|Reviewed by Chrissy McVay
|'With hips like Africa's rocking cradle' is my favorite line...beautiful poetry.|
|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
"Blue Madonna Rising" takes one to fly on wings of imagination under the clouds of intuition, and brings one to land facing the rainbow of creativity on the garden of the Poet, where one can breathe scented moments of wonders.
Thank You, Master Aberjhani for showing another flower to enchant and educate us on our journey to beauty.
In gratitude and reverent admiration.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|This is breathtaking poetry, Aberjhani. Thank you for sharing this magnificent poetic gift. Love and peace to you.
|Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
|Breathtakingly beautiful, Aberjhani, leaving an empty ache of sorrow and happiness I can't explain...
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
|Reviewed by Only A Poet
|Poetry does not get better than this!|
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
|I like the way you bring oposites together to emphasize meaning in phrases like: "to cold Christmas mornings when heat shed my flesh
to rhythms of my love for you". Concepts like "wild" and "divine". You take us through your final words: "Almost immaculate" "almost angels" but not quite we're perfectly flawed, and so is life and love. This brilliant piece of writing, is deserving of study. Thank you for this poem, and for getting my brain in gear. You made me want to write. You really did!
|Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore
|so beautifully cosmic and filled with soul, definitely a piece from the heart meant to open eyes wide, with wonder!|
|Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez
You are an outstanding talent!,..an awesome spiritual man with
the obvious gift of expression and I am delighted that you share
these beauties and more wise as a result.
be blesses with all holy beauties and real joyfilled healthy life!
Rich cetaceas son;',...criso
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|Are we imperfect or are we merely unique in ways that do not conform to the considered norm? Certainly, being poetic, imperfection seems so amazingly acceptable and so easy to define and it also appeals to our insecurities(and even the strongest of us have them). Consider that we each may be perfect and exactly as God intends for us to be at this exact moment and we get a whole lot of questions about how even opposites could possibly both be perfect. I am bending from the point of your poem here,I know, and I appologize for doing so, because I really enjoyed this wonderful offering; its beauty, your wonderful images and the overall feeling of joy that it created in me as I read it. It is a masterpiece in its own right and contains an understanding that seems inspired and evolved...it is for that, I asked about perfection in all things not to argue your words. You simply got my wheels spinning. Oh My Gawd!!!! What if we ARE actually perfect??...LOLOL ;) Excellent writing!
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|A beautiful poetic creation
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|"...to give her perfectly flawed self
to her other perfectly flawed self..."
And we are all perfectly imperfect.
A joy to read.
|Reviewed by E. Richardson
|This is a delightful piece of work. The composition is lyrical and the imagery is otherworldly...it touches on so many levels...sensuality and spirituality...eroticism and innocence...This is an exception piece of work my friend.|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|no matter how imperfect, the passion of love always defines its own intrinsic sensual mystery ...
divine thoughts & visions ... the images are awesome ...
|Reviewed by Sandra Mushi
|A beautiful and powerful write that is expressive, caprivaing, spell binding, passionate, sensual and yet almost spiritual in its purity! I bow to you, Aberjhani!
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|Captivating imagery, written with eloquence and grace...beautiful
Carole...love and peace
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|We danced a cosmic dance wild and divine
and you were the song I always sang best.
And you sing these wondrous poetic words very well, too, Aberjhani.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Masterfully written Aberjhani....with such sensual imagery...fine job!!
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Takes one in all manner of enjoyable directions..
Kate makes some very good observations too..
It is masterfully written, one can feel a tad of your own personal history..
|Reviewed by Paul Williams
|A passion of intense delicious imagery, that has one's mind going off on all kinds of tangents, such is the poems voracity. Mystical yet strangely familar, The Blue Madonna is a true beauty.
Have a Very Merry Christmas and another stunningly creatve New Year my friend.
|Reviewed by Ken Colonsay
|always know I'm in for a cosmic experience when I read an Aberjhani poem - accomplished writing!|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Maybe it is the kef that has me in a daze. LOL Everytime I read you of late I have to ponder whether or not it is too late for me to find work as a roofer, because I am damn straight not in your league when it comes to expressive poetry. Nope. I'm deluding myself. Great, and I say that knowing whereof I speak, poem.|
|Reviewed by Nordette Adams
|This poem has so many layers, can be read several ways. Yes, it is a love poem, but it could be two lovers, a mother and child, a goddess and pilgrim. However one reads this poem, one cannot escape its beauty. It's lit with the glow of cherished memories welded into the heart by soulfire and reborn as mystical aria . ~~Nordette|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
How incredible your vast knowledge is to allow you to conjure up such a ripe and luscious fruitful offering of sublime love perfected in divine places...
Is this a perfect poem of perfectly flawed perfection? the conundrum, I say with the caveat, if there is any flaw, it is perfectly flawed. Your astonishing poetry ,and your last lines
made me say that;-)!Now I'm pondering if I said it right,all your
Christmas blessings to you and yours,
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|You cast a spell with your descriptive words.|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Love the descriptions within this write.|
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|Almost perfect... am I kidding?!! You have captured perfectly what it means to be sinless, flawless... ALMOST immaculate by the grace of God and yet... not quite! The human quotient is there and what a quotient it is: the very best bit: passion! Passion is, by its nature, fire and free-ranging... and maybe it's its lack of discipline that makes it "flawed". Yet God Himself is the author of all passion, and displays Himself as a passionate God, capable, of course, of the full gamut of emotions.... and would we dare suggest that He is flawed? Impossible! This "Blue" Madonna therefore knows and tastes of perfection itself - freely, fully and without censure. Perfection! TY Kate xx|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
This makes my heart soar. Such imagery, such power, such...I don't know, love in your words--a tour de force, this write. A masterwork!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.