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  Warm Chill
by jude forese
Sunday, December 25, 2005
Rated "G" by the Author.

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Standing on this jetty
Probing out into the sea
The ebb of a new year approaches
As I consider what may come to be

But I know nothing will be different
In fact, all will remain the same

The wealth of six hundred ninety people
Equals that of three billion,
Now that’s a bit insane

Poverty breeds in abundance
Children die by the score
As technology turns into a deity
Little is done to feed the poor

Disease spreads throughout the jungles
Terrorism besets all cites
Brutality titivates injustice
Apathy provokes iniquity

Woman are abused and children neglected
Prejudice and intolerance are on fire
Brainwashed and secluded
Few will endeavor to become inspired

Yet standing on this jetty
I feel the winds of time
Remind me of the possible
Fruits within the vine

Civilization is fluid
Dreams are beginning to combine
Life’s subtle differences
Will find a way to rhyme

So I will offer my hand in friendship
This coming year I will
Spread what good is within me

And in a small way
Warm the chill



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Reviewed by m j hollingshead 6/21/2006
well done
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 1/8/2006
Glad I got to this, Jude. While I don't share the same belief that we are getting worse, I admire your effort to change a few. Your poetry is inspiring and reaches many. Your still, small voice is multiplied like seeds upon the soil, spore upon the sea.

Keep up the good work.

Ron
Reviewed by Marilyn Seray 1/1/2006
wonderfully written. moving sentiments
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 1/1/2006
"So I will offer my hand in friendship
This coming year I will
Spread what good is within me "

This is sound and wise advice for all. Let it be so throughout this hurting world. Thank you for this gift, Jude. Happy New Year to you with love and peace,

Regis
Reviewed by Karen Cino 12/30/2005
Gorgeous. What a warm feeling I got from this poem. The message is strong and the inspiration is outstanding. In a lot of ways you are describing a lot of people living here in NYC too. Hits close to home.

~Hugs~
Karen
Reviewed by Kay P Devenish 12/29/2005
I am warm already,Thank you Robert.
Beautiful ,beautiful, poetry.
Reviewed by J M 12/28/2005
You capture the time and days of this planet well within your verses.
Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper 12/28/2005
you always warm the chill Robert, but I would say you set a big fire with this fine piece
Reviewed by Robin Ouzman Hislop 12/28/2005
a poet's poem, the seeming incurable ills of the world are daunting
to what we think real aspirations ought to be & inevitably force us
to these melancholic reflections saludos
Reviewed by Dale Clark 12/27/2005
What more can one do? Great message within.
Reviewed by Debashish Haar 12/27/2005
A very thoughtful observation surrounding our times. A very happy new year, Robert!

D
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 12/27/2005
And I hope many join hands with you, Jude - this very chilling world truly needs all the help it can get right now.
Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*® Authors & Creations 12/27/2005
A hand that offers is also a hand prepared to receive so it can offer again, endlessly. This magnificent poem shares that touch of hope which has indeed the power to thaw the chill, if only hands will dare to reach for the warmth of offering and receiving only to offer again, thus combining dreams. Thank you for extending this faith in such a warm way.
Love&Light*
Alexandra*
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 12/26/2005
Stark reality. In yer face type write, but very subtle and gentle. With the message -most powerful- Most powerful indeed.
The needs of the many? Tragic, vile and down right wrong wrong wrong...
Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen 12/26/2005
Beautiful, pensive piece, Jude. Thanks for the breath of fresh inspiration.
Peace,
Carolyn
Reviewed by Dawn Richerson 12/26/2005
it begins with one hand extended, one voice unafraid that it might be swallowed up in darkness. and then there is another. and another. I believe there is much truth in your observation that dreams are beginning to combine. though I, too, am distressed by poverty and the selfishness of our times, but my heart is warmed by the thought of you reaching your hand out from your jetty and the others of us eager to embrace the "possible fruits within the vine" doing our part as well. A real blessing to read this day after the excess, Jude. Be well and always strong in spirit, Dawn
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® 12/26/2005
Dear Ace,

"A smile wrapped in kindness
or a hug that gives brief warmth
may be all one desperate soul needs
to keep the 'Candle of Hope' burning."
©2005 Joseph* ~ OneLight*®

May your Quest be Blest!!!

Love & Light,
Joseph
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 12/26/2005
You already warmed this old chilly heart just by sharing your written words....thank you!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 12/26/2005
You would not just warm it up, you would heat it to a boil! ;-) Yes sometimes it can be very discouraging to view the world as it is, and then we continue on, knowing it will change :-)
Reviewed by Kate Burnside 12/26/2005
"As usual, Jude, you point to the darkness but then light a candle." Thank you, Nordette... just what I was thinking. In the mines, they used canaries to detect the presence or absence of oxygen; here we are, suffocating through greenhouse gases and the atrophy, perhaps, of our own Christmas excesses... and your acute eye is on the canary which you sing back to life and give the kiss of life to! :)) And how cinematic is that - standing out on that promontory with your black hair and great coat billowing - like The Matrix (just need the Bono shades...) sensing and feeding the burgeoning fruit as yet concealed within the luscious vine? You point the way too, it seems, to the confluence of liquid spiritual entities which will perhaps create a Neo-Flood situation, the spiritual seas within which the New Birth will take place and upon which the New Order will sail. And Sage is spot on too... The Ouroboros is your "mark", init? What you've got tattooed on your shoulder... or somewhere!? Hmmmm... that's got rid of the chill, anyhow. Spring is already in the air, I think... Krokus Kate xx
Reviewed by Carole Mathys 12/26/2005
Your ending said it all Jude, just think if everyone felt that way what changes could be made...

Carole...love and peace
Reviewed by Nordette Adams 12/26/2005
This is the best way to approach what overwhelms us, to divide it into smaller chunks and do what we can do. If we would look at our communities this way and each determine to do what we can do, even if we'd simply determine to raise our children (those of us who have children) to be socially conscious and care for fellow humans, respect all life and the earth, then we would have done something to make the world better instead of worse. If we'd each say that we will be part of the solution and not part of the problem, then we'd have a better chance at lasting. As usual, Jude, you point to the darkness but then light a candle. Very nice. ~~Nordette
Reviewed by Felix Perry 12/26/2005
this speaks volumes of the intensity of love within your heart and the great sense of friendship you share with your fellow earth neighbors. all the best Jude.

Felix
Reviewed by Michelle Mills 12/26/2005
I realized this past year that frustration for what I can't change is fruitless. All we can do is change what we can...making the corner of the world we live in a little better for having been here. This is a tremendous write Jude...a great reminder of what we all have a responsibility to do...and the rhyme and rhythm is great as well. Blessings, Michelle
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 12/26/2005
I agree with Sherry's comment. Wonderful inspiring write. I like how this poem ends.

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel
Reviewed by Sherry Heim 12/26/2005
And yet I ask myself, why have I been chosen to live in such times? What is it that I am here to do that can make a difference? We can look out from that jetty and see only darkness or we can look out from that jetty and see from a different perspective, ways that we can subtly change the world. Holding on to the negative will only genereate more negativity. The ray of hope, that you conclude this poem with, is what we all need to aspire to if we want our world to become a better place. In times when things are going well, it is difficult for us to make our mark, but with the way things are today, it is relatively simple. Excellent poem and Happy New Year to you.
Take care,
Sherry
Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope) 12/26/2005
This is so great and so deeply touching my feelings. There is one thing causing problems to this world: greed and lack of putting thoughts together and integrating humanity to produce a new breed to lead this world.
Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater 12/25/2005
Signs of the Ouroboros, the ancient snake symbol biting its own tail in The Wheel of Time, The Alchemy Wheel, a symbol of infinity and renewal. The ouroboros eats its own tail to sustain its life, in an eternal cycle of renewal. This poem is The Eternal Return.

Sage
Reviewed by L. Figgins 12/25/2005
This is all we can hope to do, RJ. Each in his/her own sphere of influence-however large or small-be a light and "spread the good".
The harvest will come in its own time. It takes years from the planting. Seems that as a species we have an inclination to learn the hard way, but then a good frost produces a good wine. Fine write. Best wishes for the New Year...Lin
Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero 12/25/2005
Outstanding, I agree! I admire your mind and spirit, Robert. Thank you so very much for being who you are. I feel like a better person for having read your words. God Bless you!

Carmen :-)
Reviewed by E T Waldron 12/25/2005
Outstanding Jude! I notice lately you have begun to rhyme. You do it so well it can be easily missed, and that's a compliment;-) This poem is a road map all could follow. Your points are well made and they seem most probable.I love that hand offered to warm the chill. That is a great guide for us all.Also love the fruit within the vine line!Kudo's!



Love,

Eileen
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