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A poem about conquering the tougher times in life by trusting the support of our friends.
Two souls upon a mission
Came together on a path
Both in unique positions
Bound by a wretched wrath
Their burdens felt were plenty
Their trialed struggles great
But unlike that of many
They found they could relate.
The two leaned on each other
Through good times and through bad
They found strength in one another
When the days were tough and sad
And, together, they continued
Through indulgent faith and force
Toward an indecisive venue
Along the charted course.
The souls held something grander
Than the wretched wrath abound
On the pathway that meandered
Through the oft uncertain ground
For together, in their hardships
The two found peace within
In the blessing of their friendship
And the common ground they’d been.
© 2005 – Jill Eisnaugle’s Poetry Collection
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|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|An oft told tale of opposites coming together for the common good. Well done.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Beautiful poem Jill!!
|Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*®
"The life we live
is much more grand
when we walk our path
holding someone's hand."
©2005 Joseph* ~ OneLight*
You have stated it so well here.
Love & Light,
|Reviewed by J M
|This is very beautiful poetry flows so smoothly.|
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|Your poetry is always pure and beautiful, Jill, as well as perfectly crafted with impecable rhyme scheme. I love this poem, the message and the wonderful graphic. Happy New Year to you!
|Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
|Trust is imperative in any relationship if it is to survive. I liked this poem. It has a happy bounce to it.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Your poetry always comes to life under your gifted pen Jill!
Love and a Healthy Happy New Year to you and yours!
|Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine
|Wonderful message. Great picture. R|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|This is beautiful, Jill, and that picture is too adorable! Very well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Burleson, Karen Lynn. :D
Happy New Year to you and yours, and hope you had a good Christmas! :)