|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
as is "Procreation", "BEAUTIFUL" as it is!
WRITE ON Gwen!
|Reviewed by M Flack
|Naughty but nice. I like the analogy of Candy Apple Red. Sweet and seductive. The concept of a woman wearing red lipstick is in fact rather Freudian. I won’t mention what it is meant to allure to. As I may get censored by the system. But it is provocative and sensual…
Great playful write. Thanks…
|Reviewed by Regina Pounds
|Gwen, what a delightful poem...vivid writing, easy to visualize scenario...(red is Aries' color)
|Reviewed by Ian Thorpe
|Ooh I like it!
Ever thought of doing one on Pojmegranates, the classic symbol of female fertility?
|Reviewed by Nordette Adams
|A genuinely creative and unique piece.|
|Reviewed by Malcolm Watts (Reader)
|Very sensual piece. Well done. Malcolm|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Parsons
|LOL. Well said, Gwen! My hubby loves red and I love this poem. :)|
|Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia
|What an interesting thought, Gwen...my husband does love RED lipstick!
Very well written! love ~ rhonda
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
I love candy apple red, but didn't think it would be this...ummmmm...stimulating? LOL A thought provoking, yet fun, write. Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
|Oh, very well done indeed! Engagingly vivid!
Bravo, dear Poetess!
|Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez
|I used to drive my best friends candy apple red lamans convertable.
A 1972 BEAUTIFUL CAR AND I LOVE THIS WRITE BECAUSE IT SITUATES ME THERE AGAIN .
PEACE AND THANKS FOR SHARING',
|Reviewed by E. Richardson
|hummmm....I once owned a candy apple red chevy...and it did play a large part in my early explorations and discoveries ...hehehehehehe....this is a cute and provocative write, Gwen.|
|Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore
|mhm! i think so! there 's something about red that just brings the life out in folks, don'tcha thank? ;-)|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Very clever write! BTW I have always thought it would be nice to own a candy apple red car :-)|
|Reviewed by Barbara Terry
|A stimulus of ... procreation? It could very well be Gwen. Men have been known to want to...well, just want to, for reasons less than a color of lipstick, or eyeshadow, or nail color. I love this, because it is so true. Thnx for sharing Gwen. May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, maybe too stubborn for my own good, joy to the world, peace on erth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS))))))))), your very sad and very terrified little sister, Barbie
"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be."
|Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*®
|Never cared for red lipstick, or any lipstick for that matter. Much prefer the natural colour. More delicious for kissing too!
Love & Light,
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
|I agree with Tiger Lily Eileen below...red is a seductive and alluring color
Red also makes a bull angry...lols
Very clever write Gwen !
|Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
|Vivid and sly. . .fun!! 'Pea';)|
|Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)
|Very sweet and creatively penned. Happy New year to you friend|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Makes me want to go check my lipstick bin.
Good work, and the mood you set is wonderful.
Have a great New Year, Gwen.
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Sweet write, Gwen. I love that color and your verses conjure up all sorts of images and sentiments in me. Thank you. Happy New Year to you. Love and peace,
|Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
|OH Gwen...you laid this down with style and still burned rubber! Smokin' HOT!
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Excellent poetry Gwen!!
Happy New Year M'Lady!!
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|I wouldn't be a bit surprised, in fact I would be astonished if there wasn't a bit of procreation going on.|
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Colors attract be it in cars or a man's obsession.|
|Reviewed by Steve Patterson
and thanks for letting me know the 'story" behind it.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Very creative thinking Gwen! Red is seductive and sensual.
Your poem puts a vibrant twist to it!
|Reviewed by Sue Hess
|great poem, gwen. red has never been my color (except for my car) but i got the procreate part down okay|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Love the poem, and the ending, Gwen!|