|Reviewed by JMS Bell
|...TOO LITTLE...TOO LATE... THIS IS A GREAT WORK THAT IS WRITTEN WELL AND SOLIDLY SUPPORTS YOUR THEME. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS|
|Reviewed by J.L. Day
|This is quite an intriguing piece, it touched me.|
|Reviewed by Barbara Smith
|Sometimes the rose can't be smelled because of personal interferences. I do like this much!|
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|unique poetic expression Lori|
|Reviewed by Robin Ouzman Hislop
|waking is seldom as clear as it seems nor what you think you lose really what you lose a v moving piece saludos|
|Reviewed by Michelle Mills
|Wow, this shoots an arrow straight at the reader's heart. Reminds us all of how fragile love can be sometimes. A beautiful write Lori. Well done. Michelle|
|Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
|This is stunningly affecting. In just a few words, you have
painted a picture that will linger. . .and linger. . . Marvelous!
|Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
|Now you are free to love in a new way, eyes wide open, heart protected by a thick coherent insulation. Lori, come back another day and tell us how it feels. Hope the one you match with is the match of interest.
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Your poem expresses deep meaning while evoking powerful emotions, Lori. Thank you for sharing this gift. Happy New Year with love and peace,
|Reviewed by Henry Lefevre
|Your poem reminds me of my promise to never get completely drunk. I'd rather stay awake and enjoy the next experience -- whatever it turns out to be.|
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|Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook
|"In love with the numbness of life"...as always, I bow to you, dear poet. Your writing is flawless.|
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
|A composition of extraordinary and exceptional depth and brevity Lori !
I agree with both Sherry and Carmen below in their analysis
Few indeed are those who truly know the art of loving, and only the
individual concerned can possibly metamorphose their own outlook and future, without prompting from others !
I believe you fall into this category....
I wish and pray for inner happiness and contentment for you in 2006
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Lori your poems are always so unique and meaningful! This one is especially potent The last five lines are incredible, enough to make the mind ponder for hours.Kudo's!
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Beautifully done Lori!!
|Reviewed by Alex Nodopaka
|Happy New Year,
may you wake
Many excellent turn of thoughts. Thanks for sharing.
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
This is a masterful piece! It's so creative!
Happy New Year to you!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by jude forese
|yep, we covered similiar ground today ... we must live and celebrate the moment and not sleep through it ... though once we realize what we had, we can still appreciate what we had even when it's gone ...|
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|We can spend our lives waiting for the right moment. But that never comes, because today is the right moment. For it is the only time one can live. Gotta grab the time before time grabs you.
You and Jude are in tune today...
|Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
|Ouch, is right! A common experience, I'm afraid. I think few know the art of loving, and knowing how to love. Very concicely and economically written, to give the reader full understanding.
|Reviewed by Tyrone Banks
|It is often said that sometimes, while looking for what you most desire, you are blind to that which is right in front of you. A small poem that can fill an entile collisseum(sp.) with memories!!
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Ouch this one is painful to read and must have undoubtably been painful to write but a valuable lesson and message to remind us all how easily love can be lost. Well done Lori.
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|The scars of the past often remove us from what we could have now, if only we could learn to trust, to believe. The veil of darkness shrouds our vision and we turn away from the only star that could lead us back into the light. There is comfort in that dark place for we know that we can survive there, but there is also a hollowness that can only be filled by stepping out of our protective cocoon. This is an amazing write, Lori, strong and introspective and perfect for a time that is slated for new beginnings. Happy New Year to you!
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|I lost myself inside of me
Something many of us can relate to, Lori, and quite a poem.
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Deep and profound AND just damn good poetry from a talented hand. Really good.|
|Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
This is one of the best poems that I have read this year.
Your poetry is always so unique Lori,this one really touched me,it's beautiful yet sad too.Excellent work!
Best wishes always
and Happy New Year!