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Blue Storm
by Dale Clark
Tuesday, January 03, 2006
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Blue Storm


We walk up the path together hand in hand
We come to a verdant pasture
surrounded by firs and pines
The smells are so divine
We spread a blanket for our picnic lunch


After we eat we lie together and watch the sky
The clouds drifting by in formation of imaginings
I tell you a story of the open range and wild ponies
You laugh and smile, You say this is a tall tale
I smile and say, Iíll brew you a blue storm


We are caressed by a soft breeze
off in the distant horizon a thunder head forms
We hear the thunder rumble and see lightning flash
Suddenly the wind picks up and before you know it
it is upon us so we seek shelter in a shed on the hill


The rain pours down into the gullies and ravines
We are startled by the thunder crashing
The lightning claps and enlightens the dark storm
It leaves us as suddenly as it came
I say, told you Iíd brew a blue storm


A rainbow appears on the horizon as the sun slips in
The spectrum of color blends in the landscape around us
Iíll tell you about the pot of gold at rainbows end
but only leprechauns can capture it
I laugh, I could tell you a tall tale about the little people


We walk back up the path towards my pickup truck
We stop and look back with our arms around each other
We kiss and I know Iím falling in love with her
You smile at me and say I had such a wonderful day
She whispers in my ear, oh you do brew a blue storm
 


©Dale CJ Clark



 



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Reviewed by Bonnie Torrente
I love what you've written here Dale. A true romance novel. Hard to capture, easy to remember.

Bonnie
Reviewed by Robin Labenberg
You have me smiling from ear to ear..What a great poem and romantic story..I wish you much luck but does someone who can make blue storms need it?
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*ģ
A wonderful story of two lovers on a stormy afternoon, CJ.

Love & Light,
Joseph
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Lovely sentiments, Dale. Thank you for sharing them. Love and peace,

Regis
Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
F a s c i n a t i n g.
Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
So lucky the two of you.Your poem of blue storm painted me a pretty rainbow to read.
I loved it.
Best wishes always
from
kay.
Reviewed by Dale Clark
Kate-This is for you lol Yeah I made a boo boo in
that last stanza It should go like this: I think ;)

We walk back up the path towards my pickup truck
We stop and look back with our arms around each other
We kiss and I know Iím falling in love with you
You smile at me and say I had such a wonderful day
You whisper in my ear, oh you do brew a blue storm




Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Dale...you amaze me. Well done, you rascal.
Reviewed by Kate Burnside
... Hang on... my mind's bending with the her/she usage in the final stanza... my brain is reading it as one and the same with "you"?! Or am I one sandwich short of your picnic?! I'm afraid, me bein me, my mind was on those wild and free fillies so was rather leaping ahead and making some hay-rollin assumptions about the need to retreat to the shed in the rain... nothing like the sound of a good downpour outside: music to combine by! Damn... just goes to show how into this beautiful scenario I was... all the Dale ingredients in place: the spread blanket and horses - just the fire missing in this one. But - who am I kiddin?? Passion is smoulderin here, even if it ain't yet on fire! Smokin as ever! Love it in whatever shade! LOL K xx
Reviewed by Lori Moore
Beautiful romance. I love the images.
Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Love that walk I just took. Your imagery is superb; I could even feel the rain. Thanks for sharing this.

Carmen :-)
Reviewed by L. Figgins
And what a brew it is! A lovely day, romantic and tender but that "blue storm" lurks on the horizon. The lightning and thunder(rumblings of conflict and pain?)come on suddenly with frightening affect and just as quickly disappear as the "sun slips in" (lovers reconciled?)and a "spectrum of color blends in the landscape" (acceptance of each other's failings and circumstance?). There is no "pot o' gold" for these lovers who embrace while looking back, cognizant of the past but living in the present. I'm starting to sound like the "Prof" arn't I, lol! The imagery touches all the senses. The deepest feelings are expressed through metaphor and this write is rife with them. But like I've said before, go ahead and tell me I'm full of "hooey". I can take it! As usual you take us to a place and hold us there 'till the end. Another fine write, Dale...Lin
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
You've also brewed up a great poem here, Dale.
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Dale,

Captivating, just like the storm! Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by E T Waldron
What a lovely romantic story/poem Dale! Truly captures the way love was and can still be for those wise enough to want the best.A keeper!Thank you!

Love,
Eileen
Reviewed by J M
Love the hole poem and the brew this one is so visual and wonderful.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
One of your very best Dale!!

Love Tinky
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