|Reviewed by Bonnie Torrente
|I love what you've written here Dale. A true romance novel. Hard to capture, easy to remember.
|Reviewed by Robin Labenberg
|You have me smiling from ear to ear..What a great poem and romantic story..I wish you much luck but does someone who can make blue storms need it?|
|Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*ģ
|A wonderful story of two lovers on a stormy afternoon, CJ.
Love & Light,
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Lovely sentiments, Dale. Thank you for sharing them. Love and peace,
|Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
|F a s c i n a t i n g.|
|Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
|So lucky the two of you.Your poem of blue storm painted me a pretty rainbow to read.
I loved it.
Best wishes always
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|Kate-This is for you lol Yeah I made a boo boo in
that last stanza It should go like this: I think ;)
We walk back up the path towards my pickup truck
We stop and look back with our arms around each other
We kiss and I know Iím falling in love with you
You smile at me and say I had such a wonderful day
You whisper in my ear, oh you do brew a blue storm
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Dale...you amaze me. Well done, you rascal.|
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|... Hang on... my mind's bending with the her/she usage in the final stanza... my brain is reading it as one and the same with "you"?! Or am I one sandwich short of your picnic?! I'm afraid, me bein me, my mind was on those wild and free fillies so was rather leaping ahead and making some hay-rollin assumptions about the need to retreat to the shed in the rain... nothing like the sound of a good downpour outside: music to combine by! Damn... just goes to show how into this beautiful scenario I was... all the Dale ingredients in place: the spread blanket and horses - just the fire missing in this one. But - who am I kiddin?? Passion is smoulderin here, even if it ain't yet on fire! Smokin as ever! Love it in whatever shade! LOL K xx|
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|Beautiful romance. I love the images.|
|Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
|Love that walk I just took. Your imagery is superb; I could even feel the rain. Thanks for sharing this.
|Reviewed by L. Figgins
|And what a brew it is! A lovely day, romantic and tender but that "blue storm" lurks on the horizon. The lightning and thunder(rumblings of conflict and pain?)come on suddenly with frightening affect and just as quickly disappear as the "sun slips in" (lovers reconciled?)and a "spectrum of color blends in the landscape" (acceptance of each other's failings and circumstance?). There is no "pot o' gold" for these lovers who embrace while looking back, cognizant of the past but living in the present. I'm starting to sound like the "Prof" arn't I, lol! The imagery touches all the senses. The deepest feelings are expressed through metaphor and this write is rife with them. But like I've said before, go ahead and tell me I'm full of "hooey". I can take it! As usual you take us to a place and hold us there 'till the end. Another fine write, Dale...Lin|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|You've also brewed up a great poem here, Dale.|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Captivating, just like the storm! Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|What a lovely romantic story/poem Dale! Truly captures the way love was and can still be for those wise enough to want the best.A keeper!Thank you!
|Reviewed by J M
|Love the hole poem and the brew this one is so visual and wonderful.|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|One of your very best Dale!!