|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|a gem of a write well done
Love & Peace
|Reviewed by Debra Baker
|Carmen you have a gift, a spirit in your soul that reaches out clenching hearts of your readers. How beautiful is your pen.|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|This is a beauty Carmen!!
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Love this expressive write!|
|Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
|This is beautiful. I have saved it to read more than the three times I've just read it... Quite extraordinary, really. You are gifted with the form and the spiritual themes are expressed with deftness and grace. Dawn|
|Reviewed by Aberjhani
|What a very extraordinary meditation of the dynamics of individual healing and rebirth. Surely too many prefer the sensation of their self-righteous rage to the beauty of renewal because, I think, of the nature of change itself--that release of the comfortably known and leap into the unknown that we call faith. An intensely beautiful and provocatively spiritual write.
|Reviewed by Helga Ross
|Your best sonnet yet, Carmen.
The rhyme-scheme's right, the rhythmn is smooth, and the message relevent.
|Reviewed by J M
|Carmen, Art is framed by your excelling words this is so beautiful calms the soul and refreshes the spirit. Stunning poetry I so enjoyed.
|Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Not many know perfection but you have achieved it! This is just gorgeous!
|Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa
|ah this is such splendid work Carme..I could never write a sonnet..but then again, I'm not a poet. You Carmen are amazing!
love this piece,
|Reviewed by Cynth'ya firstname.lastname@example.org
|A most passionate plea Sis Carmen.
|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
Beautiful composition to glow on the Major Art, and to enrich the pages of Poetry. "A Poet’s Dawn [Spenserian sonnet]" has paid its dues and delivered a profound message.
I salute You, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Reviewed by jude forese
|i like the direction your poetry is going ... you write a sonnet will skill and purpose ...|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|I admire the discipline required to produce such a piece, Carmen. A beautiful poetic gift well-shared. Thank you. Love and peace,
|Reviewed by Regina Pounds
|Die poet, and mourn
the self of past and give raw form a chance
to speak anew, and sing rhymes without scorn
find new breath, music, rhythm, sound and dance...>>>
Carmen, that's exquisite...a passionate plea, yet moderated advice... you excel
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Oh my Carmen, you have once again touched perfection. I'm in awe of this sonnet,especialy the theme, and word usage,how you carried it through, like a classicist from where sonnets were born. The art and sonnet are a gift to be treasured!In my library!;-) Thank you!
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|I think I shall annoint you the Van Gogh of AD, you are reaching out and painting your words with exciting and new forms. Hope you are feeling better.|
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|This is a beauty. Very well done.|
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
|This wonderful sonnet has a transforming and renewing urge throughout Carmen !
We poets and writers must be free thinkers to be able to totally express ourselves, unhindered by form, and unrestricted by convention, otherwise we will never capture The Eternal Now, which is forever evolving and changing !
Reminds me of the great Expressionist painters who met together in Parisian cafes to exchange their free thinking ideas and techniques.
The accompanying picture is very symbolic and compelling