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Lori L Moore

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A Lesson Unlearned
by Lori L Moore
Saturday, January 07, 2006
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After six shots of gin, that
Beefeater seemed to crack a smile.

Happily, he escorted you
out of my mind,

like a Bow Bell Cockney
expelled from the tower.

Unfortunately, Jose
let you back in.

Thatís what I get,
for trusting a pretty label.

Now, where did I put my Godiva chocolate?

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Reviewed by Jerry Diamond 10/16/2009
You need to be careful in choosing your friends.
I chose myself long time ago..:)

Jerry
Reviewed by JMS Bell 8/29/2009
GOOD WRITE WITH THE PHRASES THAT PAINT A VIVID IMAGERY OF ONE MAKING EVERY ATTEMPT TO 'FORGET'. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Reviewed by David Young 3/18/2007
I like this very much. Best wishes Dave
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 10/19/2006
Thank you for sharing your wit, Lori. Love and peace to you,

Regis
Reviewed by Marilyn Seray 1/9/2006
Hahaha, love this
Reviewed by Janet Parker 1/9/2006
This is pure genius, Lori. I love it!
Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore 1/8/2006
lol lovely! food acts as a standin for emotional highs and lows sometimes, and you get that reality across very clearly, here! loved the beefeater line! i thought they weren't supposed to smile!
Reviewed by Kay P Devenish 1/8/2006
I agree with Joselyn.
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 1/8/2006
Ahh the sound of Bow Bells. Gotta keep yer head on..
Like you I'm a sucker for pretty labels, well pretty anything I guess.
Chipper write... Any coffee choc's Send this way... If yer find 'em!
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 1/8/2006
Hahahahahaha...I may never get over this one.
Perfect ! Love it!!!
Reviewed by Robin Labenberg 1/8/2006
Great stuff Lori..Happy New Years to you and I am happy to see that you are doing good!.............Robin
Reviewed by Alex Nodopaka 1/8/2006
i like
the way you read
labels
and if i
were one
i would be
an Arabian

lol
Reviewed by J M 1/8/2006
Like the sense of humor and the creative play on labels.
Reviewed by jude forese 1/8/2006
LUV sense of humor, Lori ;)
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 1/8/2006
Hahahaha...you go girl...lol!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Felix Perry 1/8/2006
Oh Lori you do so have a way with the words and this play on friendship of the vices really brought them out. Well done sweetie.

Felix
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 1/8/2006
Gotta love it!!!!!
Reviewed by Barbara Terry 1/7/2006
Yes Lori, Bottoms up...giggle. I agree with Sage, but I think it is too funny. Made me laugh. Also Lori thnx for the review of A Wandering Soul. I had just posted it...giggles again. May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, maybe too stubborn for my own good, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your still very sad and very terrified little sister, Barbie

"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be."
Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater 1/7/2006
Bottoms up, Lori! Ooops! The Godiva popped out! Funny poem! Keep them coming!

Sage
Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero 1/7/2006
hahaha -- good shot, Lori. Very funny.

Carmen
Reviewed by Sherry Heim 1/7/2006
Too funny, Lori. Chocolate is the best vice. The only real hangover we get from it is centered near our belt.
Take care,
Sherry
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 1/7/2006
A woman's true curse LOL. Great write.
Reviewed by E T Waldron 1/7/2006
Hahaha Lori you have one helluva sense of humor! Really enjoyed this one!;-)

Eileen
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