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Dark Emptiness
by Tinka Boukes

Monday, January 09, 2006
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Dark Emptiness

 

I can smell the wind coming from the ocean
And waves tumbling turning red
As the sun goes down in the west
Our love has gone away with it
Your words were bitter like almond bread
Your eyes betrayed me
With your last kiss
Your love was already dead
And my love taken away from me
Like a dark coat
Loneliness comes my way
Covers me up in sorrow
Between scattered glass
Covering me up with darker thoughts
Until the flickering of the flame goes out
And only leaves behind the ashes
I am telling my story to the ocean and sand
And it washed away by the current
And brushed ashore into my face
And I wish it would go away
To another world to see
And I want to turn my back
And try and walk away
But where there was pain in my body
There is only emptiness to hide away
And I wish I could lose this heart
Or exchange it for another
Loneliness covers me up
In that dark coat of sorrow
I will wait till tomorrow
For you to come back


 

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Reviewed by Ronald Hull 1/15/2006
Dark, dark, dark. What's with all this dark shit! The Pale Rider. A whiter shade of pale.

Ron
Reviewed by Cathrine Hottran 1/12/2006
i know this feeling way to well, exvellent write!
Reviewed by Tina Clark 1/10/2006
You've captured sadness and lonely so well in all you've said Tinka, here's hoping that love and happiness washes back to you to kiss your face..........Well done!

Hugs
Tina
Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper 1/10/2006
Hello Tinks, kind of sad but it is you poetry
Reviewed by Felix Perry 1/10/2006
Salt tears must mingle with the oceans salt water to give your poems the magic that you always have their. The heartache, the longing and the quiet hope that maybe some day life as you knew it will return. YOu capture these feelings and share them with your readers honestly and openly and we feel your feelings and long to take the pain away.
Great job as always Tink.
Felix
PS...Sorry I havn't been able to catch up lately due to new job and health issues been either working, sleeping or struggling to keep up with the reviews and not give up on writing the odd poem myself. THink of you often though. Fee
Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen 1/10/2006
Times like these demand a complete change of scene, Tinka! Get your sorry ass on the next trans-oceanic flight outta town and forget about this lout...
Superbly penned emotional capture.
Peace and Blessings,
Carolyn
Reviewed by E T Waldron 1/9/2006
Agree with Carole...superb poem!
Reviewed by Carole Mathys 1/9/2006
Your words drip with so much sadness and sorrow, Tinks...just move beyond him, you deserve so much more...love and peace

Carole
Reviewed by Marilyn Seray 1/9/2006
the ocean holds so many secrets, and i truly think that the storms it tosses ashore is because it wants to cleans itself of sorrow and leave all the secrets ashore

very nice poem, Tinka
Reviewed by Only A Poet 1/9/2006
a compelling and emotional write Lady Tinka.
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 1/9/2006
And ye must wait, yet again. Drat. Pretty nice stuff here, Tink.
Reviewed by Peter Paton 1/9/2006
Tinka...He dozen't sound like he is worth waiting for !
I would ditch this rogue !
Very sad and emotive write
Peter
Reviewed by Lori Moore 1/9/2006
Very touching. Your creativity soars here.
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 1/9/2006
Very sad, wonderfully written!
Reviewed by Michelle Mills 1/9/2006
Gosh, I could feel every line of this. I've felt that way for some time now, since my Dad died. Sometimes I think I wear sadness the way you described..."In a dark coat of sorrow". This is an outstanding write Tinka. Brava!! Michelle
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 1/9/2006
...pretty music amid swells and waves of the ocean...
Reviewed by George Carroll 1/9/2006
A sorrowful heart emotes in this sad write and I wonder if it is worth the wait.



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