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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
1/15/2006 |
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Dark, dark, dark. What's with all this dark shit! The Pale Rider. A whiter shade of pale.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Cathrine Hottran |
1/12/2006 |
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| i know this feeling way to well, exvellent write! |
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| Reviewed by Tina Clark |
1/10/2006 |
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You've captured sadness and lonely so well in all you've said Tinka, here's hoping that love and happiness washes back to you to kiss your face..........Well done!
Hugs
Tina |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper |
1/10/2006 |
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| Hello Tinks, kind of sad but it is you poetry |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
1/10/2006 |
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Salt tears must mingle with the oceans salt water to give your poems the magic that you always have their. The heartache, the longing and the quiet hope that maybe some day life as you knew it will return. YOu capture these feelings and share them with your readers honestly and openly and we feel your feelings and long to take the pain away.
Great job as always Tink.
Felix
PS...Sorry I havn't been able to catch up lately due to new job and health issues been either working, sleeping or struggling to keep up with the reviews and not give up on writing the odd poem myself. THink of you often though. Fee |
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| Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen |
1/10/2006 |
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Times like these demand a complete change of scene, Tinka! Get your sorry ass on the next trans-oceanic flight outta town and forget about this lout...
Superbly penned emotional capture.
Peace and Blessings,
Carolyn |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
1/9/2006 |
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| Agree with Carole...superb poem! |
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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
1/9/2006 |
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Your words drip with so much sadness and sorrow, Tinks...just move beyond him, you deserve so much more...love and peace
Carole |
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| Reviewed by Marilyn Seray |
1/9/2006 |
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the ocean holds so many secrets, and i truly think that the storms it tosses ashore is because it wants to cleans itself of sorrow and leave all the secrets ashore
very nice poem, Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Only A Poet |
1/9/2006 |
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| a compelling and emotional write Lady Tinka. |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
1/9/2006 |
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| And ye must wait, yet again. Drat. Pretty nice stuff here, Tink. |
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| Reviewed by Peter Paton |
1/9/2006 |
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Tinka...He dozen't sound like he is worth waiting for !
I would ditch this rogue !
Very sad and emotive write
Peter |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
1/9/2006 |
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| Very touching. Your creativity soars here. |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
1/9/2006 |
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| Very sad, wonderfully written! |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Close Mills |
1/9/2006 |
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| Gosh, I could feel every line of this. I've felt that way for some time now, since my Dad died. Sometimes I think I wear sadness the way you described..."In a dark coat of sorrow". This is an outstanding write Tinka. Brava!! Michelle |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
1/9/2006 |
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| ...pretty music amid swells and waves of the ocean... |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
1/9/2006 |
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| A sorrowful heart emotes in this sad write and I wonder if it is worth the wait. |
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