by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Friday, January 13, 2006
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Gotta write 'bout something other than the fields of fire and my problems. Hope you like this one...I do. :)
Wrote it they way it came to me, in a poor southern voice.
...they is a sartin
in bringin poems
world -- one don't know what
they will look
like or if they ll have
all of they
fingers an toes til
wet an slippery
from they rough
passage thru the pen
to the page.
i m proud to say i
had all of
my chilren at home:
some of them
warnt perfect; that
dont matter ...becuz when
i saw them
lyin there, blinkin
in the light,
wavin they tiny
fists in the
air, i fell in love -
(c) 2006, Karla Dorman.
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|Reviewed by Sandra Mushi
|Delightful write, Karla!
|Reviewed by Safi Abdi
|How so very easy to fall in love with the tiny ones...
|Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen
|THis is an excellent write
|Reviewed by Phillip William Allen
|Sweet n Precious|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
This is precious, sweet, and true; very different write from you, but oh, it is done so very well! BRAVA; take a bow!! well done, my dear, well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, karen lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Emeka Nwogu
|I enjoyed this one. It is pure, crystal clear and beautiful. The picture is grand as well.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Sweet as roses this one touches the heart strings of bootie bows and is special.
|Reviewed by Cynth'ya email@example.com
|Love that southern comfort accent in this. and this poem is just dang keeyoooot!
(((hugs))) o plenty Sis. Karla!
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|You show great creativity Karla! Keep stunning us!;-)|
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|A very unique write Karla, I love it...love and peace
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|Like honey from a dripper, this is sweet, Karla.
|Reviewed by F William Broome
|Honey child, that's what life is all about; Babies. I love the whole process - what goes on to make them, and the pride of birth and shwoing them off once they're here! Some of mine have a bad case of the unglies, but nobody else better say that! This is warm and cuddly - and very clever. Thank you for good reading. - Bill
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|Very creative. Iíve been teased in fun and at times ridiculed by the ignorant for the hint of Texas that often surfaces in my speech, but Iím proud itís there.|
|Reviewed by Only A Poet
|very clever and true, enjoyed.|