|Reviewed by Vesna Blueflame
|No one can merge the spiritual and sexual as you do..this is genius!
gotta save this one as well..LOL
|Reviewed by Barbara Terry
|Yes, my lips do quiver. Paul said it bes I think, and I echo his sentiments, sis. This such ritualistic, spiritual erotica at is finest. It has a sensuality that leaves the reader's body quivering, in anticipation, of the outcome. The two phrases that I thought were the best, are:
I pull it with my lips
from her sacred
And as you pull it from her sacred chamber, she flows like a clear river that gives and gives.
This is great sis. Thnx for sharing. There is so much I haven't read from you, but I'll catch up...giggle.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be."
|Reviewed by Paul Williams
|Ritualistic spiritual erotica at it's finest. The senuality this piece oozes has a magic of it's own, superb Sage.
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Well, now, Sage, you've stirred passionate waters with this outstanding write! Liquid fire, indeed....fantastic!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|....Ooooooo... no, but the timpani's vibratin.... can't get over our parallel imagery, Sage: I have constellations mentioned in my today's pome, which is a woman to woman write of a different order: Mother/Daughter. Hmmmm... I have been told that the first love affair in life is in the womb... and so it continues, I guess... the womb is central. Can't pretend to "get" all of this, but seems to me very Arwen and Galadriel, in Tolkien-speak. Just realised how the 69 image can also be thought of as foetal. How strange... Kate xx|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|superb erotica interwoven with the essence of Sage sagacity ...|
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
|This is liquid dynamite Sage, and there is a time for everything in this world and beyond !
Your Art is the Art of No Style, as you show your dexterity and adaptibility to change the mood effortlessly to suit the subject required.
Love the telling picture
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Naw, my lips isn't quivering, but my pulse has quickened. LOL|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|You never fail to tittilate and entertain, while sharing your substantial research, which is always excellent!
|Reviewed by firstname.lastname@example.org Bennett
|God bless you in this new year as you embark upon arts of expression way down deep within your heart. or writing is not impressions but a simple expression from the heart that small words become so easy to understand and visible.|
|Reviewed by Nordette Adams
|A highly sensual and erotic write. I alluded to a liquid pearl in "The End of You" and rattled several cages. LOL. Good to make time to read you again, Sage. ~~Nordette|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Love your descriptions and questions.|