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A Sonnet: Really…
by Erin E Kelly-Moen
Monday, January 16, 2006
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I see that I am quite remiss, taking
Sonnet and giving it a twist. I read
Sir Francis Bacon’s sharpness rewaking.
Who’s saying what is what, and that’s what's said… ?

Excuse me as I pretend to sonnet
Any poem I feel to be a lesson.
Relearned by one, I cannot stop, the thought
of words I cannot seem to unbegin.

So, here I am in formed sonnet-beauty,
Seen, yet, still abhorred. The rules of poeming
Will not change, because I think, I think, Me,
Therefore I am… A construct of needing.

I’m misunderstood in the freeing. I
Am not that, but, I am that that thinks why…

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 1/16/06

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Reviewed by Chuck Keller 10/10/2007
Wow! Applause from another who has attempted the sonnet. Great work!
Reviewed by Robin Ouzman Hislop 1/16/2006
philosophy ends in speculation but gets there legitimately
poetry also ends in speculation but doesnt get there legitimately,
could say, since there's always the personal take on it, there's
always a riddle even in paradox but congrats on these special lines..
Who’s saying what is what, and that’s what's said…
I/Am not that, but I am that that thinks why
Reviewed by Aberjhani 1/16/2006
A sonnet like a maze that sings. I'll have to try it sometime:-)
Reviewed by Rukiya Faizah (Reader) 1/16/2006
I bet you enjoyed writing this because i know it was nice to read. Very easy going and witty.
Reviewed by George Carroll 1/16/2006
A sonnet with a twist of mirth added.
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