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Simply Pathetic… by Emotions Of Love Thursday, January 19, 2006 Rated "G" by the Author. Share Print Save Become a Fan About foolish dream I am sure we all have had plain and simple for all ages to read
Simply Pathetic… I am just another fool With such a narrow mind I sit here dreaming of swimming pools With such a narrow mind I am walking around covered with sin With too many thoughts of now and then I am walking down the hallway With such a narrow mind I am laying down life with no struggle. Simple dreams of wanting and needing a simple man like you I am closing my green eyes now There’s only room enough, To dream of narrow bridges Small enough to get me through Another restless broken dream Another lonely broken bridge To late for reaching out, For another foolish dream I’m drowning in self-pity From another foolish dream But, if I wake up choking I’ll know I’m still alive For tomorrow is just another dream Of another simple narrow mind… Simple dreams to dream upon Stars, moons and rainbows With another foolish man like You BLP-1-18-06

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Reviewed by Peter Paton	1/19/2006

Such pain and disillusionment expressed in this doleful composition We must have the ability to learn from our mistakes, and be more cautious and selective in who we trust in the future ! Peter




Reviewed by Sandie Angel	1/19/2006

It takes a bigger fool to know the smaller one. Hope you'll get discovered soon. Lucky Star Sandie May Angel :o)