|Reviewed by JMS Bell
|SO TRUE...'GOD' IN THIS WORLD...IS BEAUTIFUL POETRY. THANKS FOR SHARING THIS WELL WRITTEN WORK - ENJOYED. BLESSINGS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Love, love LOVE the second one. Strong imagery connects with the heart of a poet! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|Deep A joy to read
Well Penned ...Lori
Love & Peace
|Reviewed by Russ Okamura
|Very profound. I enjoyed this read because it made me think. Good work.|
|Reviewed by A PAX
|Oh I heard you
thats the way it goes sometimes
|Reviewed by Nordette Adams
|Cool beans of a write, Lori.|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|You demonstrate how brevity of words can be most effective and impactful, Lori. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by Barbara Terry
|And you are so right too Lori. Everytime I write a poem, I edit, re-edit, read and re-read (giggles). Sometimes a typo escapes tho (giggles again), and then when I read the posted poem, I go "oh no! (Giggles some more). Then I correct the mistake. The other day a few words just popped into my head, but that is as far as it got. (Rolling on the floor giggling). Thnx sis for sharing this with us.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
"If I have to be this girl in me, Then Ihave the right to be."
|Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore
|oooh. i like this right here. word economy in poetry is like metaphor to short stories, mandatory. meaning is spare, and yet profound. an enjoyable, thoughtful read!|
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|very interesting , hello Lori|
|Reviewed by Theresa Koch
|Much depth in these few words~`*
Exceptional as always lovely lady~*
|Reviewed by Sandra Corona
|Short, simple, exquisite!
|Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook
And you're one of the very best creators! :)
|Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
|So true Lori.
Best wishes always
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|What touches you, teaches you :-)|
|Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa
|by Jove yes!
|Reviewed by Robin Labenberg
|Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
|E x c e l l e n t|
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Reviewed by Phillip William Allen
|Proof positive that you know the purpose and reason for poetry.|
|Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*®
|Glorious ... Yes, that's what I call it!
Love & Light,
|Reviewed by Candy T (Reader)
|i haven't visited you in a while, and i see i've missed out. this is original, well thought through and has left me feeling the need to ask a lot of questions! great stuff.|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Yes it does seem somtimes that the ability to write, especially poetry does depend on that little muse deciding if he really wants us to or not doesn't it.
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Poetry <----------------Yup I say that to the mirror too Lori.. But do
keep beating the hell out of it for lying..
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Inspiring piece..thank you!!
|Reviewed by Paul Williams
|Exceptionally concise interpretations Lori, glorious creation as you quite rightly state.
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Very astute observations of the nature of poetry made a very good poem!|
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
|I am in total agreement with Sage below on this one !
I can't add any more to her insightful comments
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|If at once you don't succedd . . . Gotta love it.|
|Reviewed by Robin Ouzman Hislop
|first verse pure second rather impressive imo saludos|
|Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
|Brava, Lori. This is wonderful. Thanks for the inspiration.
|Reviewed by jude forese
|this poem exemplifies the difference when a poem disconnects from a reader as opposed it uplifts and inspires ... you did a much better job of expressing that truism then i just did ... excellent!|
|Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
|This took a quieted mind to compose. It also took an expansive thought to make a connection. This is what happens when you strike the match! May the merge be all yours, Lori. Blessed Be.
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|I am glad to see that I am not the only one who can read a poem over and over and still not grasp what the author is trying to get across. On the other hand, some poems pull me right into them and consume all of my thoughts and emotions. Great write, Lori. Your examples of contrast are on spot.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Such diverse creations! Beautifully done Lori in your
excellent succinct way!