|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Beautiful, Dawn, simply beautiful. BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Let us bow
together and pass
through the narrow way
beyond the barrier
of yesterday into
dimensions of grace.
And let us be.
Let us be.
Uplifting write Dawn....love n luck....BHUWAN!!!
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|The "wholeness" of your creation is a precious poetic gift, Dawn. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace,
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|Talk about hallowed and inspired... I hardly dare breathe... it is like witnessing a miracle! The most marvellous and awe-inspiring transfiguration, Dawn, expressed with delightful ease and the most wonderful turns of phrase. Straight into the library... I don't want to leave... love it, I think! :)) K xx|
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|"let us be" love that line. I refer
to that all the time. ;) Excellent!
|Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*®
|Amazing, simply amazing! Yes, let us all be!
Love & Light,
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|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Oh so very lovely, this is just beautiful!
|Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
|L o v e l y|
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|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Quality pure quality. Wets my appetite to re-read Bunyan...|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|lovely! :) well done, dawn!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|A marvelous poem, Dawn.|
|Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Soft and tender emotions, that we long to embrace throughout our lives, and even into eternity.
I love the touch of this beautiful write.
|Reviewed by Ken Colonsay
|very nicer images of togetherness, going onward with shared glances
thru the door of love.
|Reviewed by J M
|Beautiful poem with excellent expressions.|
|Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)
|Beautiful, beautiful. This has blown me away Dawn. Missed you so much these days.
|Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
|Metaphysical perfection, Dawn. Powerful simplicity and Grace.
Very well penned indeed!
Peace and Blessings,
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Fantastic! Deeply penetrating read, Dawn!
|Reviewed by email@example.com Bennett
|I really liked and admire the realness of this poem. God bless you for writing this expression from the heart.|