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Anticipation
by Sandy Knauer
Wednesday, January 25, 2006
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The pain of waiting . . . |
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Anticipation
Quaking rifts hollow
weighted emptiness to the core
Prickling eyes fix
on imminent doors,
Radical transformation
lurks in wait,
Tears and glee on hand
pulsing at the gate
Alien realms or solaced cosmos,
Humanity on the line,
A cautiously thrashing heart
fearfully bides time
Sandy Knauer 1/06
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
1/27/2006 |
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There is wisdom to be discovered in this flowing creation. Thank you for sharing this gift, Sandy. Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Phillip William Allen |
1/27/2006 |
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| Smooth and complete. Enjoyed |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
1/25/2006 |
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Well done!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
1/25/2006 |
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As you do best you have welded together this collage of images that give the reader an insight into what may be coming. Be it good or be it bad the waiting is the giver of hope and life and I think you have prooven this in your words.
Felix |
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| Reviewed by Huda Orfali |
1/25/2006 |
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Radical transformation
lurks in wait,
We are in dire need for a radical transformation
thanks for sharing this gem
love and peace
Huda |
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| Reviewed by Daryl Morgan |
1/25/2006 |
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| Nice to meet a rhyme that's adventurous and imagistic. A lot of time rhyme throws me off, but this great. Thanks-stacy |
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| Reviewed by Sue Hess |
1/25/2006 |
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| GOOD RHYME and meter...i liked this |
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