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On the other side of the camp
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all he could do now was to massage the shadow of their sublime experience; and with the chilling of each night since that time it was just as if he still could hear voice-overs, muting the feels-so-right from the sermons of dare-not-do wrongs
that night they were fruitful, stamen and seed finding their birthright in fullness of moon rays as memoriz'd prayers of repentance were whisper'd face down in the pillows of the maidens who press'd youthful and taut aching veils seal'd tight inside the confines of a safehouse where the linens never tell;
but he lov'd her, against the rules in the shadow of the lesser light, knowing all the while that soon he would face them all in chapel in a robe that hid his secret, and proclaiming to the promise keepers "Truly, God is Love."
© 2006 cynth’ya lewis reed all rights reserv’d
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Twin Poem: After-Burn
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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
1/29/2006 |
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Splendid writing, Cynth'ya!
love and peace...
Carole |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
1/29/2006 |
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Wow! You have broached a touchy subject, but no one does it better Cynth'ya! Thought provoking and well done! Blessings to you!
Eileen^ |
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| Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher |
1/29/2006 |
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A great write, most if you put both parts together, even though each of them makes a great piece of work by itsself!
Birgit and Roger |
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| Reviewed by Sherry Heim |
1/29/2006 |
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Excellent write, Cynth'ya. I would have to agree with Nordette, even if he did love her, I am certain that at some point she will know that it was rape.
Take care,
Sherry |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
1/29/2006 |
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Most outstanding!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Nordette Adams |
1/29/2006 |
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| Well, I wouldn't call what he did love. Intriguing write, well done. |
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| Reviewed by Shoma Mittra |
1/29/2006 |
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| fabulous |
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