|Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
|Wow Eileen,this is a power puched mighty poem.
Best wishes to you and you always
your Aussie pal
My favorite lines are:
'Intricately woven threads of promise
too easily unravel '
very beautiful wording and true too,I can relate.
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|Fascinating insight in this timely write, Eileen!
love and peace...
|Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
|I know this pendelum swing and I feel its pull in the world at large. Dawn|
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|very interesting perspective poem Eileen,|
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|"Be careful of gifts...in golden glitter"
or "beware of those bearing gifts" ;)
Great piece Eileen!
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|compelling read, eileen; always a super job from you! well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :(
|Reviewed by J M
|Time is revealing and the slow motion is catching up with this planet and humanity powerful poem....|
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Sounds like most women one time of the month:) Also a good advert for HRT..lol
But so true. God is in everything. So we have nothing to fear.
Fear is a tool the naughty devil uses...
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
|You paint a grim picture of the duality and uncertainty of modern day living Eileen, that fluctuates between the poles of awareness and horror !
The ambivalence of these days leads you to think we are undoubtedly enduring the End Times !
|Reviewed by Muhammad Al Mahdi
|Captivating, deep thoughts though, I'd like to say, there is a kind of "time" which is an illusion and there is another time -unlike that which we perceive time to be- which is eternity dwelling in itself.
This is the absolute, changing only in the changing of the eye beholding it.
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|All that beautiful glitter is the manna from Heaven for too many people.|
|Reviewed by Jo Janoski
|Exciting and so true!|
|Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
The only thing certain in this world of uncertainty, is the breath of death that we will all face. However, we both know that by no longer being vigilant we are only forcing our hands way too obviously.
I've heard life as being in a poker game...but at the rate we are going..the game is going to be over before the cards are even dealt.
It's a damn scary thought...but we've done it eyes wide open. They say 9/11 was a fluke...that the terrorists gained alot more destruction than even they thought possible...well...because we as a nation are so unresponsive and so eager to 'move on' with our lives... they now know that they can actually plan another 'fluke' and get away with it. Plan they are; and kill they will..Fluke? It won't have to be..they can send their feaux gold boxes and we'll open them like a box of candies.
Yes..it's a damn scary thought. I don't think people understand the breath of death...is forever.
|Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
|Nicely written. Enjoyed this. Dusted off your broom lately?|
|Reviewed by Only A Poet
|a very interesting write, things to ponder.|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|You can read this in many was...dark butinspiring at the same time!!
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Each one a nugget of pure wisdom.|
|Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)
|Well crafted couplets; shining with exceptional beauty and wisdom. Thanks eileen and GBQ.
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|hmmmm, "Mood swing from holy to hellish
in a matter of moments" I hate to say this but this could describe me somedays ;-)
You do realize that you have both a horror and spiritual write within this one write?
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Eileen....Riding the winds of change
feeling the breath of death ....such a relevant write....soul touching write...Eileen, am lost somewhere in between your verses....love n luck....BHUWAN!!!