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Cactus, an emblem of my hope.
by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Sunday, January 29, 2006
Rated "G" by the Author.
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When the
wind blew,
I felt you
standing upon
the mirage
of my
broken heart.
Desert,
yes, just a desert
I am,
without you
my love!
Cactus,
an emblem
of my hope.

Copyright 2006 Bhuwan Thapaliya


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Reviewed by Chrissy McVay 1/31/2006
Very wonderful ode to the desert cactus and use of metaphor...
Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy 1/30/2006
Bhuwan, the cactus is an excellent symbol for for hope. It live in the most uninhabital places with little to nourish it, yet it suvives.

Good job, my friend.

Bobbi
Reviewed by M.Bennett Hooper (Mikii) 1/30/2006
Bhuwan, so glad you are back, continue to stand tall my friend. Your emblem says it all. Peace, love, and blessings. Mikii
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 1/30/2006
This reminded me to stand tall no matter what!!

My hubbytold me he thought he married a beautiful flower....but I turned out to be more like a cactus!!

But that made me feel proud knowing the bad things in life made me stronger!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Jeanette Foresta 1/30/2006
Long time no see!
A sad poem from the heart.

The cactus survives because it is self sufficient. From within itself it finds the strength to go on.



Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope) 1/29/2006
This is a desert speaking from the botom of its heart. Wonderful piece.
Reviewed by E T Waldron 1/29/2006
When we are without our love it is like
a barren desert very intense painful poem Bhuwan!
Good to see you!;-)

Love,
Eileen^
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 1/29/2006
Thought provoking write! Love it!
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