|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|sweet dreams Sue, keep the good in your heart, great poem|
|Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
|Ah, the dance of love and life, so beautifully captured herein, Sue.
Peace and Blessings,
|Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
|Happy Birthday, Sue. Just had my 58th on the 17th. Loved this poem even in its primary state. You did a wonderful job of making the reader think about "what could have been"
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Beautiful write Sue!!
|Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
|I think at times we tend to not want to expect better in fear of recieving much less than we yearn for. Its easier that way isn't it?
It doesn't hurt as bad..and even if it does we would never let anybody else ever know it.
This is good..and I love the way you ended it.
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Memories. Without them like would not be as sweet. Even the bittersweet one. Good.|
|Reviewed by J M
|Shows the longing angst and power love holds this one is sad but beautiful I love the fairy tales I beleive in those too.|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Painful but expressing a universal theme of life; thank you, Sue. Love and peace,
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|A romantic longing so painful it makes the heart hurt trying to read these lines and compassion for the subject is overpowering. Well done Sue.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|A truly exquisite poem Sue! I love what you had to say!
|Reviewed by Steve Patterson
|Beautiful & well expressed.