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  1.  Life on Earth

Its Been Only One Day
by Tracey L Hardie
Tuesday, January 31, 2006
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It’s been only one day…

since silence fell between us.
something we said
would never happen— 

we went our different ways
like the flip of a switch

on one minute 
                            off the next.

But this felt different
more like attending
your own funeral—

where there are no flowers
and no one attends

and the music played
is on a borrowed violin.

And for some reason
the only thing that is allowed
to run free, truly free
is a thought….

         what happen to the promise?





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Reviewed by Cathrine Hottran 2/7/2006
Sad, excellent write!
Reviewed by Only A Poet 2/1/2006
a touching write, well penned and enjoyed.
Reviewed by Dale Clark 2/1/2006
Sad and what does happen to the
promise. So much emotion in this
piece, Tracey.
Reviewed by Paul Berube 2/1/2006

Many hearts have been broken by unfulfilled promises. Very sad, effective and to the point. Well written, my friend.
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 1/31/2006
Deeply emotive and meaningful verses, Tracey. The mood is effectively created and shared. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Reviewed by E T Waldron 1/31/2006
You have a gem here Tracey! The art is stunning too! Beautiful work!

Reviewed by Jane Rodway 1/31/2006
These short, raw lines really hit the point home. Great poem.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 1/31/2006
Oh my God this hits homeground Bigtme!!

Love Tinka
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