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| Reviewed by Safi Abdi |
2/25/2006 |
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Very touching poem, all their lies, lies are all over the place, Sandy,I just hope and pray one day very soon the fog will be lifted. Thank you for seeing through the lies.
Safi
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| Reviewed by Veronica Hosking |
2/11/2006 |
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| Well done - lies can do great harm. |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
2/1/2006 |
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deception is a destructive force whose influence we must always reject ...
you did well with the subject matter ... |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
2/1/2006 |
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A truly powerful piece!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Huda Orfali |
2/1/2006 |
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A powerful scream
Hope it will be heard
All I hear now is the echo of my screams but no reply
probably hear another lie
love and peace
Huda |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
2/1/2006 |
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An uplifting poem of strength. Sandy, this is so well-wrritten.
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
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| Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope) |
2/1/2006 |
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| Well crafted poem with verses that touch deeper as you scale up in the well constructed imagery and wisdom. Well done Sandy |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
2/1/2006 |
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Sandy...I am impressed this got inside my mind and heart and I knew I'd been there before. This poem so well done in rhyme, meter, imagery is all superb but the ability to grab me and let me know I am not alone that others have felt the same sting of lies and love is so....astounding.
Felix |
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