by Kristian L Mahrling-Harding
Thursday, February 02, 2006
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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Oh love that toucheth, e’en the soul of me
With fervent fingertips
Trace the lines of my existence
And let me breathe between thy lips
Hold me locked in cosseted embrace
With tendrils taught and tied
Forever bound in eternal ardor
Passions light as unremitting guide
Oh my love, which grants me peace
Where comfort lies in wait
Whisper words forever sovereign
At last, to consummate
Symbol of our eternity
We place upon our hand
Committed to our path of light
We pledge our troth before the land
Take me to thy heart to lie
Oh my beloved soul
For we have floundered far too long
To reach our journey’s goal
For if thou wouldst be my love
This vow, I so revere
To honour, cherish and adore you
That you may know YOUR peace is here
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|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Great...this is awesome poetry...love it!!
|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
"Evermore"... This poem is a painting with multi-colors of of true love in eternity. It gives this reader a message that I translate as: When a soul synchronizes wonders – gratitude flows in One´s life – and love glows making the heart pump Ichor to live the eternity of togetherness in the receiving-giving of
blissful emotions and dreams.
I salute You, Sublime Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Ow, whot good-sounding stuff yew right, I luv hit to pieces. Okay, just being goody this a.m., loved your poem.|
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
Your words have a Shakespearian ( don't know if I spelt that right ) feel to them. Love your writing. Made me think of " Romeo and Juliet "
|Reviewed by Divinity 11
|That is so beautiful
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
|Has a distinct and beautiful Celtic feel to it Kristian !