AuthorsDen.com   Join (Free!) | Login  

     Popular! Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry
   Services MarketPlace (Free to post!)
Where Authors and Readers come together!

SIGNED BOOKS    AUTHORS    eBOOKS new!     BOOKS    STORIES    ARTICLES    POETRY    BLOGS    NEWS    EVENTS    VIDEOS    GOLD    SUCCESS    TESTIMONIALS

Featured Authors:  Joan Huffman, iTianna Xander, inancy rossman, iP. G. Shriver, iRosemarie Skaine, iG M (Jerry) Roberts, iHugh McCracken, i

  Home > Fantasy > Poetry
Popular: Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry     

R. Vance

· Become a Fan
· Contact me
· Books
· Poetry
· News
· 4 Titles
· 6 Reviews
· Save to My Library
· Share with Friends!
·
Member Since: Jan, 2006

R. Vance, click here to update your pages on AuthorsDen.




Featured Book
The Path to Eternal Life
by Henry Miranda

Let me pose a question. What if you only had one day to live? What would you do differently? Letís face it Ė we all live our lives like thereís no tomorrow; we do..  
BookAds by Silver
Gold and Platinum Members


Featured Book
Scorpion
by Richard Turner

An Ancient Secret. An Unstoppable Foe. An exciting sequel to The Devil's Path At the close of the Civil War,Colonel Scott finds hims..  
BookAds by Silver
Gold and Platinum Members



Popular Poetry (Fantasy)
  1.  Merely a Dream.
  2.  Theatre of the Mind
  3.  Crazy...
  4.  Divergent
  5.  Looking for Me
  6.  Superstitions
  7.  Happy in my Dream world...
  8.  Sleep
  9.  Serendipity
  10.  ...abomination...?
  11.  Day dreamin'...
  12.  As Pretty As A Picture





Angel
by R. Vance

Friday, February 03, 2006
Rated "PG" by the Author.
Share   Print  Save   Become a Fan

Recent poems by R. Vance
•  This World
           >> View all 2

A poem of a broken girl

If only you had heard her cry; heard her cry
If only you had heard her scream
Then maybe she would be
Still alive


Her mind is broken and empty inside
Sheís lost all truth
She knows only pain
Her battle is lost
Itís her holocaust
Her fight is done
But she hasnít won
Sheís giving in
To the demons in her head
She wanted to be free
But you let her be
You didnít see the warning signs
You didnít comfort her when she cried
And now sheís gone insane
The voices scream at her
They wonít let her be
Her chains pull tighter
This is whatís happened


To your angel:


Your angel has fallen to the ground
Your angel is running low on fuel
Your angel is fighting with herself
Your angel is losing tonight


And she dies
And she cries
Oh, she cries


Your angelís battle is lost
She lost to her mind
And her mind made her cry
Doesnít it pain you to know
You could have helped


Your angel might still be alive
Had you only
Heard her cry
You angel might have been set free
If you had only heard her scream


Your angel has lost the fight!
Your angelís blood spills tonight!

Reyanna Vance
Want to review or comment on this poem?
Click here to login!


Need a FREE Reader Membership?
Click here for your Membership!


Reviewed by Regis Auffray 11/3/2006
This is sad but very compelling, Reyanna. Sometimes, we just don't want to hear. Thank you for sharing. Love and peace,

Regis
Reviewed by J M 11/3/2006
This one is so sad................ The angel should have been saved. happens to many times.... Welcome to the Den.
Reviewed by Peter Paton 2/3/2006
I agree with Karla below completely !
This was one angel that should have been saved Reyanna !
Welcome to the Board !
Peter
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 2/3/2006
Reyanna,

If only they'd listened...a powerful, powerful thought provoking write of what might have been had they heard her cries and did something about it. Thank you for your words today, Poet!

Let me be the first to welcome you to Author's Den; you're among friends.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.



Authors alphabetically: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z

Featured Authors | New to AuthorsDen? | Add AuthorsDen to your Site
Share AD with your friends | Need Help? | About us


Problem with this page?   Report it to AuthorsDen
© AuthorsDen, Inc. All rights reserved.