|Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher
|A wonderful septcouplet, Jerry has put out a very catching task!
Birgit and Roger
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|To hell with the form, thi one rises above the norm with the hint of a new race created for outer space.
|Reviewed by m j hollingshead
|enjoyed the read|
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|Have to admire this wonderful attempt - nay! - SUCCESS at writing to form, Eileen. And the subject matter is fascinating. Have never been into sci-fi much... but this kind of Clark Kent and Lois Lane stuff is highly appealing! Very well done, thank you. LOL Kate xx|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Love the romance, description and use of form. Great write.|
|Reviewed by Janet Parker
|After I read this beautiful piece, I checked to see what the Master, Jerry said. I'm glad it meets with his approval. I admire you for trying and succeeding at this. Your words are magnificant.|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Ah Eileen, this is so excellent, beautifully written, just so sublime, I loved this so much,
|Reviewed by Joyce Hale
|Wow, ET - I'm impressed! Magnificent write! I salute you!
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|we are the prototype for united couples
in the new universe
and will serve in unknown galaxies
bringing to fruition ways
under Creators plans
to all who will populate new planets
Sounds marvelous, Tiger Lily. Are you Peter's new partner on his epic Sojourn to Mars??!!
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
|The content of the poem is awesome alone Eileen, notwithstanding the attention to the format !
You would appear to have mastered this septcouplet form in your own inimitable style !
Love that mystical pic !
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Great offering Eileen!!
Love your readings on William DeVault's program!!
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|I am honored and impressed, Eileen, that you and Kara saw fit to tackle the seprcouplet, and see, it wasn'tt as difficult as first imagined. It'll grow on you, maybe. Thank you for giving me the upfront kudos.|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
WOW, what a wonderful septcouplet, very well done! You have done a bang up job here! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Goodness gracious, these is absolutely breathtaking in meaning and inspiration! You shine in this one, absolutely yes. Thank you--BRAVA! (And I'm glad I could provide a bit of inspiration...LOVE the photo.)
(((((HUGS))))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
|This is great, Eileen. I'm not acquainted with the form, but like the content.
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|You mastered the septcouplet, brilliantly, Eileen. It is not as easy as it looks, though I found the free verse portion to allow a lot of flexibility. Beautiful poem I am sure Jerry will be delighted.