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MY dream
by Divinity 11 11

Sunday, February 05, 2006
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Are we awake or are we dreaming?

Are we the dreamer or the dream?


With promises in the haze gleaming

How long do we take one for the team?




You are but a whisp of smoke.

Watch the words you speak;

They’ll make you choke.

I’d hate to see you shrivel and die;

I’d rather see you reaching for the sky.


Kanisch e’ vana, kanisch e’ vana, Un’perre’ voitsch

Malechem o venna, jeowyna si va si na

Come unto us, come unto us, one for eternity

Will you return? We move on.

- yes or no?

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Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore 3/20/2006
wow...i was good to go until you came with the foreign language, then i got the chills and stopped reading, as if it were a spell or something. but, regardless, the power of this invocation is undeniable. remind me never to cross you, k?
Reviewed by Peter Paton 2/6/2006
Dreams seem to be to the fore tonight in the Den, and this particular dream reminds me a bit of my recent posting Camera Shutters, and the dichotomy of the Observer and the Observed !
Yes...we move on with full confidence, and set sail for Valhalla !
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 2/6/2006
A wonderful dream.
Reviewed by William DeVault 2/6/2006
Where have you been hiding? You are fabulous! I love the texture of this work and the ease of thought...I completely melted into it.
Reviewed by Jeff Mason 2/6/2006
This is beautiful! I don't have to know all the precise meanings to recognize the inherent beauty. -- Jeff
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 2/6/2006
Are we awake or are we dreaming?
Are we the dreamer or the dream?

A question I seem to often ask myself.

Reviewed by Divinity 11 2/6/2006
it is those that understand it
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 2/6/2006
At first I thought this was going to be wonderful, but...

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel
Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy 2/5/2006
Interesting piece, Jessica. I'm glad I dropped by.

Reviewed by Felix Perry 2/5/2006
Yes....with you, beside you and in your spirit I will move along on this journey through a parallel portal of authour den space. Hold onto the moment but chase the morrow.

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