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If I Could See from You to Me
by Bill Brent
Sunday, February 05, 2006
Rated "G" by the Author.
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If I could see
from you to me,
no telling who
I’d try to be
I’d like to think
I’d be the same,
but in a blink
I’d play that game
I’d scale that sky,
I’d wish that wish
O goal on high,
O golden fish
That slipp’ry slope
pure snow that blinds
with radiant hope
our mortal minds
So how to fish
without that pole?
O dirt of wish,
blot not my soul
And so my goal,
succinctly put,
is to be whole
without that soot
Yet in this life,
so soon we blunt
our sharpened knife
in hapless stunt
to be the man
and nothing more
Plan or no plan,
who's keeping score?
If I could see
from you to me,
could I be free?
Why try to be?
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Copyright © 2006 Bill Brent
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| Reviewed by Lois Christensen |
3/6/2008 |
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| Love to know my future but best I do not. Loneliness is part of it, I know and can handle it with God's blessings. Happy Easter too, |
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| Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic |
8/11/2006 |
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And so my goal,
succinctly put,
is to be whole
without that soot
Indeed I find myself craving the same..but removing the soot sure has proven difficult.
Love the way you think..profound
Thankyou Bill..glad I found you.
Vesna..:) |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
2/12/2006 |
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| enjoyed the mood and imagery ... |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
2/7/2006 |
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Great offering!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
2/6/2006 |
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Sweet one.
Reminds me of Leo Buscaglia and his book "Love". |
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| Reviewed by Cathrine Hottran |
2/6/2006 |
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| Good rhyming! |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
2/6/2006 |
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| Good title. Good poem. |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
2/6/2006 |
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Sometimes, we do have to walk in other's shoes to understand others. Nicely-done!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o) |
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