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If I Could See from You to Me
by Bill Brent

Sunday, February 05, 2006
Rated "G" by the Author.
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If I could see
from you to me,
no telling who
I’d try to be

I’d like to think
I’d be the same,
but in a blink
I’d play that game

I’d scale that sky,
I’d wish that wish
O goal on high,
O golden fish

That slipp’ry slope
pure snow that blinds
with radiant hope
our mortal minds

So how to fish
without that pole?
O dirt of wish,
blot not my soul

And so my goal,
succinctly put,
is to be whole
without that soot

Yet in this life,
so soon we blunt
our sharpened knife
in hapless stunt

to be the man
and nothing more
Plan or no plan,
who's keeping score?

If I could see
from you to me,
could I be free?
Why try to be?

~ ~ ~~ ~ ~~ ~ ~~ ~ ~~ ~ ~~ ~ ~~ ~ ~~ ~


Copyright © 2006 Bill Brent


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Reviewed by Lois Christensen 3/6/2008
Love to know my future but best I do not. Loneliness is part of it, I know and can handle it with God's blessings. Happy Easter too,
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic 8/11/2006
And so my goal,
succinctly put,
is to be whole
without that soot

Indeed I find myself craving the same..but removing the soot sure has proven difficult.
Love the way you think..profound
Thankyou Bill..glad I found you.

Vesna..:)
Reviewed by jude forese 2/12/2006
enjoyed the mood and imagery ...
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 2/7/2006
Great offering!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 2/6/2006
Sweet one.
Reminds me of Leo Buscaglia and his book "Love".
Reviewed by Cathrine Hottran 2/6/2006
Good rhyming!
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 2/6/2006
Good title. Good poem.
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 2/6/2006
Sometimes, we do have to walk in other's shoes to understand others. Nicely-done!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
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