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The Darkness in the Rain
by Christopher M Carroll
Monday, February 06, 2006
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Discribing in a darker light, the rain |
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The rain, as it slowly falls, dancing across the deep blue that is the sky. the deep dark grays and lightless blacks of the clouds moving with swiftness and precision across the darkend sky. A flash illuminating the darkness with a pure light. the crack of the thunder as strong as a gods rage towards the evils of the earth. a crystal across a streaked background, that represents the torment and pain of life, the hardships and toil encountered by every living creature. In a icy flood that wipes out young life, and a power that helps it grow. eerily helping and destroying on a whim, however it feels to express itself... and hope, that it will one day be over, and cleanse and purify all that it has touched
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| Reviewed by Lee Lee Leight |
3/15/2006 |
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| It makes me wanna dance in the rain.......i can picture it in my head.... |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
2/12/2006 |
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| vivid images ... |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
2/6/2006 |
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| Wonderful imagery... |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
2/6/2006 |
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| Other than a few spelling mistakes, this puts one in mind of a Thoreauvian write...he too was a man of Nature...Ed & Rufuz |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
2/6/2006 |
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| A magnificent poetic description of rain - eerily helping, and destroying, on a whim. |
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