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Dear Lord
by Linda M Hill

Wednesday, February 08, 2006
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Lord, I come to you with a humble heart
Hear the words I have to say
Looking all around me, Lord
The world get's worse every day
There's a homeless man on the corner
He just sits and cries
He loses faith in humankindness
As his spirit slowly dies
Could you touch his heart, dear Lord
Bring him from deep despair
Give him a reason to go on living
Let him know you're there


A little girl bruised and broken
Hiding behind her closet door
Her fear is real as shadows consume her
She can't take it anymore
Lord, protect her from the demons
That live deep in her soul
Her mind is full of beatings and rage
The truth she never told
Be with all the children in the world
Who's tears fall like the rain
The abused and the hurting Lord,
Reach down and ease their pain


Somewhere in the world , dear Lord
A Mother kneels in prayer
Her anquished heart is screaming
Please let her know You're there
No money for food or housing
She don't know just what she'll do
Three hungry kids to provide for
In despair she comes to You
So much pain in this world, Lord
Sometimes we can't go on
Wrap your loving arms around us
Never leave us alone

(C) Linda Hill 2006

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Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain 12/31/2008

Great image . . . you are a blessing to us all!!

LOve and Hugs,

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen 4/14/2006
I can't believe I missed this, keep these great writes coming
God Bless
Reviewed by val salazar 4/2/2006
Good girl keep praying its a calling I love to talk to Jesus. Val
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 3/20/2006
Your work are so filled with compassion. Very well-done indeed!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by gaurishankar chemudupati 3/17/2006
Dear Linda, you have done a splendid work in favour of the people who are losing their soul, the children becoming orphans and the poor facing more and more miseries! You have touched the three importan areas where the world is becoming more blemished. From your poem , I have these lines very appealing!"Wrap your loving arms around us
Never leave us alone " , "Bring him from deep despair
Give him a reason to go on living" and "Be with all the children in the world
Who's tears fall like the rain!"pen on your uplifting messages !Thank you!

Reviewed by Larry Matthews 2/19/2006
Linda,such a caring poem of love for those less fortunate.By seeing,recognizing,caring and writing you help remove the blinders from those that don't see,soften the heart of those that do not care and make those who do not recognize aware of the circumstances of those less fortunate. There is a war few mention going on as we speak.A battle for souls not blood do they seek.To pick a side takes courage and faith.Linda you are a woman who stands at God's gate.
God Bless You. Luke
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® 2/11/2006
A most compassionate plea from the heart. The best kind of prayer ... for others.

Love & Light,
Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU 2/9/2006

"Dear Lord" is an outstanding poetic composition delivering several messages, including one claiming for JUSTICE... Throughout its wise lines One can learn sage ways to convey a message... "Dear Lord" has paid its due to the treasury of Poetry, enriching the golden book of The American Fine Letters.

I salute You, Poet!

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK 2/8/2006

Only From Most Compassionate Lady Of (God) A D...

...You Shall Triumphant By Virtue...

Your True Friend,TRASK
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 2/8/2006
Most powerful prayers Linda!!

Tears here too now!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Jane Rodway 2/8/2006
This is an amazing prayer, one of the best i've ever read, current and about real life, not to mention well-written.
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 2/8/2006
There are those to whom prayer is a Godsend. You mentioned but a few.
Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson 2/8/2006
These emotive prayers brought tears to my eyes and pain to my heart. May God bless all who suffer! Exceptionally well done, Linda!
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 2/8/2006

Powerful, heartbreaking plea for the Lord to help in desperate situations. God is always there, even in the worst of times. Well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :( >tears <
Reviewed by Peter Paton 2/8/2006
I concur with Karla below completely !
This is simply a heartfelt plea for mercy and deliverance from the Good Lord !
Have no fear Linda, Almighty God looks after his own !
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 2/8/2006

Exquisite heartfelt pleas for answers to the ugliness surrounding us...beautifully, poignantly expressed. I pray God answers, SOON.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. *tears*

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