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( Valentine's Day has a way of prompting me to try a Haiku..Do I dare call this a Haiku? )..OOPS!!


a blue night shimmers

unfolding goddess soars

this time burning with love


 

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Reviewed by Muhammad Al Mahdi
Exquisite! With great command of the form.
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Well done, Vesna. The meaning and emotions shimmer through your haiku. Love and peace,

Regis
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Beautiful!!

Happy Valentines Day!!

love Tinka
Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher
Beautiful, absolutely.
Birgit and Roger
Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Passionate ku with equally passionate graphic. The hand fan compliments your line, "unfolding goddess soars"

And I'm sure you meant it to. Happy Valentine's Day, Vesna.


Sage


Reviewed by Sherry Heim
oooooh!!! Haiku or not,(I say yep, it is a ku) this is smoldering!!!
Take care,
Sherry
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Warmth and passion ooze from this ku and it speaks to the heart from the first word as it plays on the romantic in all of us.

Felix
Reviewed by Peter Paton
You convey great passion and intense feeling in this free haiku Vesna
You have all the tools in your creative box, to adapt successfully to any format
Peter
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Hmmm lets burn goddess burn...lol n shimmer too...
Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Word association brings me to The Moody Blues - "K/Nights in White Satin"... have never figured out which, but both is good... like this free Ku, Vesna. A sense of an Aurora Borealis in the chilly Northern skies... lovely! TY Kate xx
Reviewed by Kate Clifford
Love the passion of this one!
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Beautifully done Vesna, yes it is a free Haiku
(as opposed to 757 count)A very lovely one!;-)

Eileen^
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Vesna,

I agree with Nordette...beautifully penned. :)

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
Vesna,

This is pretty; nice haiku! Well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
Reviewed by Nordette Adams
I don't care what you call it; I call it wonderful. :-) ~~Nordette
Reviewed by Only A Poet
so passionately warm and very beautiful, Lady Vesna.
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